Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 4.1)

by mellifera

Published November 11, 2019

In starry veins (LMS V)

a/n: hey, thanks for checking out Starry Veins! This is the novel I wrote for Round V of LMS, and it's still a first draft! While I don't discourage any feedback, I prefer not to receive feedback on grammar! I'm not polishing this draft up yet, so I'm not as concerned about editing. I am, of course, open to all feedback, but I ask that you keep this in consideration! Thanks <3

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[Cassius]

Putting adhesive in the Guildmaster’s books certainly wasn’t Cassius’ most creative, or elaborate, trick. But after Isa had caught him trying to enchant Margaretta’s book, after he’d been sitting idle with no ideas besides putting bugs in food, he wanted to do something.

His hands were itchy. Isadora and Mishal were leaving. He should be focusing his energy on pulling something over Mishal, but every time he tried, it felt hollow. Nothing was grand enough as a going away prank, not after everything else he’d already done.

Stupid expedition and ruining his fun. What was so fascinating about some old, haunted ruins anyway? Ori would kill him if he said that, but he didn’t care.

Cassius kicked the foot of one of the display tables he was standing near. No expedition tonight, he was pulling clever schemes.

It didn’t feel clever, or exciting, at all. It was supposed to be fun.

He was pressing the adhesive to a book’s spine on the shelf—wait ‘til someone tried to pull it out and it wouldn’t come! —when there was a bustle from outside. A bustle? It was past midnight! What were people doing awake at such an hour? He was supposed to be uninterrupted!

If Margaretta caught him, she’d probably do something stupid like occupy the time he was supposed to be learning how to sew with Isadora for training with Mishal. Ick.

There was a cabinet that had an empty bottom shelf. He’d checked it earlier, looking for things to stick. For once, he was glad he hadn’t started growing the way Mishal had a few years ago. He’d be way too tall to fit in the cabinet if he was anything like Mishal.

The handle of the door clicked as he slid into the cupboard, knocking his head a few times against the shelf that divided the space. He grabbed the cabinet and pulled it shut as the door to the Guildmaster’s Study opened.

It was dusty in here. Gross. And a lot smaller than it looked on the outside. Double gross.

He strained to listen from his hiding place. What was Margaretta doing here so late? Wait. But there were… more than one pairs of footsteps. There were several in fact. What was she doing?

It was silent, save for the scuffing of chairs against the hard wood floor and someone clearing their throat. Margaretta’s desk chair moved. He could tell, it made a distinct noise. Plus, he was only a shelf away from where her desk was. A tickle rose in his throat. Nooooo. He couldn’t cough now!

“There’s been no word out of Glacier’s Keep,” someone finally spoke. “There’s been no word out of the Divine Tundra at all.”

That was one of the council members. Professor Jordan. Was he listening to a council meeting? He’d never gotten the chance to do that! This completely made up for not have a good prank on hand. He got a front-row seat into the secrets of the council. Sure, it was forbidden, but what was Margaretta going to do? Get a wine glass out of some bottom cabinet she never used?

“I presume you have a plan for the inevitably of a blood hunt?” That was the head librarian and scholar, Moira Corbeanu. He wasn’t always in best standing with her, after all the times he’d tried to distract Mishal, but if he was good, sometimes she gave him treats. “They’ll be desperate, especially after the search for their second child came up with nothing.”

“After Jax’s utter failure you mean.” He didn’t recognise that voice. One of the scholars. Couldn’t tell which one.

“Jax carried out exactly what was asked of him,” Margaretta said. Uh oh for that scholar, she sounded mad. “I’m aware of the concerns that arise from silence in the north, but if you’ll remember, King Manu’s health is unstable at the best of times. We’ve just left Catharsis. The season was harsh on their people, they hadn’t recovered from the worst colds of Moon’s Vigil. They’ll need time to recover. Last time they went looking for a missing child, they nearly entered a war with Summermount, and I doubt they’re eager to repeat such an event. The Tundra’s residents are a loyal people. I suspect the silence will last, lest that reputation be tarnished.”

Was this how council meetings usually went? It sounded solemn. He’d always been told they were boring affairs. Not that there was anything grand about this, but they were talking about… what, the Divine Tundra? What did the northern territory have to do with the Chronicler’s Guild? A blood hunt? What even was that?

“Some might feel betrayed.” Head physician and alchemy professor, Gracia. She was the only one who sounded reasonably calm. “Some might underestimate, or misunderstand, the reprehensions. Glacier’s Keep will be isolated if word gets out that the girl, Princess Kanta, doesn’t have trueblood. Everyone knows the legends of what happened to the kingdoms that lost their trueblood rulers.”

His throat tickled a lot now, and it was awful stuffy in the cabinet. Truebloods? He had never quite grasped the concept of destined rulers. Was that what they were? He wasn’t entirely clear, everyone seemed uncomfortable when he asked, and only gave him vague answers.

“You’re relying heavily on the idea that the King and Queen will be content to sit idly by,” the unfamiliar scholar said, tone rather nasty. “What about this expedition? It won’t go unnoticed. You are bringing, not just one, but two of the heirs into the open. The north will be looking for its lost princess, but let’s put that aside. Summermount is one of the most powerful kingdoms of the five, if the boy is taken notice of—”

“He won’t be,” Margaretta interrupted. “His coming of age isn’t for another year. The blood ritual for the prince of Summermount won’t be undertaken until then. They won’t know they’re missing a trueblooded heir. We need them. You all know that.”

Wasn’t there something about that? About the ruins, the fallen kingdoms, and bad things happening to the kingdoms that didn’t have trueblooded ruins? Rowan would know. He’d ask after he got out of this stupid cabinet.

He put his hands over his mouth, as if that would help stifle his cough. He nearly sneezed, but at least it didn’t make too much noise. Please don’t hear that, please don’t hear that.

“How do you know that it’ll work?” Moira asked. “This is all theoretical. And the paths to the fallen kingdoms have been worn out. What about the Wilderlands? Even the forest outside of the Citadel is beginning to change.”

“No one’s disappeared yet.” That was his history professor, Marita, who would probably be appalled to know how little Cassius was understanding this conversation. Or maybe she wouldn’t. Was trueblood that important?

He started tracing the wood grain of the cabinet door. “No, but the kids go out there all the time,” Moira replied. “Some of us have tried to warn them, but most of them don’t care enough to heed the warning. They’ve never seen the horror of the Wilderlands. Why should they be afraid of what the forest could do to them?”

“It will work,” Margaretta said, as if another conversation hadn’t just taken place. “Curses are like locks. Trueblood has magical properties beyond any understanding. There is a key to this lock, and from everything suggested in what has been recorded, I’m sure that we are in possession of it.” Her desk chair grinded against the dais it was on. “If this meeting was called simply to discuss superstitions and the possibility of threats from an already weakened kingdom, it was for nothing. I’m aware of what repercussions could unfold, and should they fall upon us, we will handle them.”

“Margaretta,” Gracia said. “Do Isadora and Mishal know of the perils of the ruins?”

Cassius froze. There wasn’t… actually danger in going to ruins…? There couldn’t be. They couldn’t take Isadora and Mishal away if they were going to be in danger. That was preposterous.

“They’re aware,” Margaretta said. “This meeting is adjourned. I’m sure all of us would like to retire for the evening.”

It could hardly be called evening anymore, but that wasn’t the point. The perils of the ruins ran through his head over and over again, almost masking the sound of everyone leaving the Guildmaster’s Study.

At some point, his heart had begun thumping hard against his chest and it rang in his ears. This wasn’t something he was supposed to have overheard. This wasn’t fun eavesdropping, like trying to pick up whispered scandals or someone who caught Ashael cutting off lilies that belonged to someone else to give to Isadora.

He didn’t understand all the talk of trueblood and the Divine Tundra, but it made him queasy. He did understand danger in association with Isadora.

Why now? They had all grown up in the Chronicler’s Guild. They were supposed to stick together, supposed to grow up and become boring historians or whatever, but they were supposed to do it together.

Cassius opened the cabinet door cautiously. The lights were all off and nobody was left in the room. There was an empty, copper-encased glass on Margaretta’s desk. He had adhesive left, but… it wasn’t fun anymore. His stomach was light, airy, and it was making him dizzy.

Stupid expedition. Stupid Guildmaster. Stupid ruins.

There was nobody in the halls, nobody awake, as he snuck back to his rooms. Even if the council members were still up, the quarters that he lived in, near the other five, were on the other side of the Citadel. It was dark and cold as he made his way up one of the winding staircases. He couldn’t remember the words for a warming spell. He was wearing a jacket over the pyjamas he’d snuck out in, but his feet were frigid.

For a moment, as he snuck into his quarters, with the door holding the plaque that read Ida, Percival, and Cassius, he thought that at least he’d done a fine job of creeping around without being discovered.

Then he heard a murmur. He recognised the spell for a floating light too late and froze when a soft ivory glow filled the kitchen and entry space.

His mother was in her nightgown, dark brown hair braided in thick knots over her shoulder. She was holding the light in his palm but blew it into the air without looking away from him.

“You need to stop getting into trouble,” she said, leaning forward in her seat and folding her arms over the kitchen table.

His cheeks flushed. “It’s not hurting anyone!” he protested, then shrunk back defensively and crossed his arms over his chest. He approached the kitchen table, scowling. “What are you going to do about it anyway?”

Mum stood up and crouched it front of him. She put her warm hands on the sides of his head, pressing his messy curls down, and kissed his forehead. Then she pinched his ear. He yelped. “Nothing this time, if you don’t use that attitude with me again.”

She let him go and he peered up at her, then ducked his head. “I’m sorry mum,” he said, soft and sincere. He wished he’d just been able to fall asleep, like a normal person, and hadn’t heard the council meeting at all. “I love you.”

Her hand brushed his cheek gently. “I love you too, Rascal. Go to bed, you’ll be exhausted tomorrow. We’re going to have a talk about you sneaking out, you know.”

He let her help him out of his coat even though he was definitely old enough to take off his own coat, thanks. And yeah, yeah, he would stop sneaking out, he’d been restless and couldn’t sleep and needed something to do.

Cassius pretended he didn’t see the worry in his mum’s eyes as he went to his room. Restlessness was hardly as bad as a dangerous expedition, why should she worry about him?

He’d tell Belle what he’d heard, tomorrow, and she’d reassure him. She’d tell him it wasn’t dangerous. It wouldn’t be so bad. Except that she’d be gone.

He stared at his ceiling for a while and tried to think of ways he could distract Mishal in the library. He had to get him once, just once, before he left.

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2,068 (oops)

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Shady
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Shady wrote a review Review · Sep 15, 2020

OMG CASSIUS YES! We got so much Cassius from the other perspectives I forgot I haven't gotten his POV yet but I am HERE for it!

He should be focusing his energy on pulling something over Mishal, but every time he tried, it felt hollow.


"pulling something over" feels weird? Over ON Mishal? Pulling something ON Mishal? Not sure what you're going for here but I feel like this needs to be re-worded a bit.

Nothing was grand enough as a going away prank, not after everything else he’d already done.


Big mood.

It didn’t feel clever, or exciting, at all. It was supposed to be fun.


Aww, baby. I want to ruffle his hair.

He’d be way too tall to fit in the cabinet if he was anything like Mishal.


I really? love the way you phrased this? I know Cassius is only meaning it in like, physical stature, but like... it really drives home the little rivalry between the two of them, even in Cassius's thoughts, and I dig it.

A tickle rose in his throat.


Ahaha I wondered about that with the dust comment.

Sure, it was forbidden, but what was Margaretta going to do? Get a wine glass out of some bottom cabinet she never used?


Uh oh, bad vibes here xD

He did understand danger in association with Isadora.


Awwwww, my heart <3

“You need to stop getting into trouble,” she said, leaning forward in her seat and folding her arms over the kitchen table.


Right, yeah, he'll get on that right about the time he stops breathing xD

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Okay! Wow, Cassius overhearing important plans, I dig it!

His characterization seemed a wee bit too young for 13 in this chapter, tbh. He was as adorable as ever, but he had a bit too simplistic of an understanding, I think? Most 13 year olds think of themselves as very smart, and he was like well SURE I DON'T UNDERSTAND which... idk, it just seemed strange for a 13 year old to be having the sorts of thoughts he was having?

That being said! It was an exciting chapter! He is SUCH a wholesome, bratty little character. And I love that his Mama don't take no lip from him xD

Looking forward to see where you take this next!

~Shady

I really? love the way you phrased this? I know Cassius is only meaning it in like, physical stature, but like... it really drives home the little rivalry between the two of them, even in Cassius's thoughts, and I dig it.


I'm so glad that you noticed this small detail because I litter them everywhere for no specific reason but I love them and I especially love when they are noticed :')

His characterization seemed a wee bit too young for 13 in this chapter, tbh. He was as adorable as ever, but he had a bit too simplistic of an understanding, I think? Most 13 year olds think of themselves as very smart, and he was like well SURE I DON'T UNDERSTAND which... idk, it just seemed strange for a 13 year old to be having the sorts of thoughts he was having?


I can absolutely say that I wrote this particular chapter while I was still going back and forth on ages for the characters and he was younger at the time, but it really doesn't hold up either because he wasn't that much younger. I think the way I wrote him here was less because I was trying to make him sound young and more because he's too freaking smart and I was having trouble with some of the pacing because of it so I tried to...dumb him down??? I COMPLAIN ABOUT THIS WITH OTHER CHARACTERS AND YET--

but!! I'm glad you brought it up!! I will make sure that I keep that in mind for the second draft because it really needs addressing.

thank youuuuu <333 big appreciation ^^

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starlitmind wrote a review Review · Sep 14, 2020

HEY HEY <3 Back for some of my favourite characters c:

Putting adhesive in the Guildmaster’s books certainly wasn’t Cassius’ most creative, or elaborate, trick.


Why am I not surprised we are starting this chapter out with a prank? xD

Nothing was grand enough as a going away prank, not after everything else he’d already done.


Aww so many sad feelings these past chapters </3

No expedition tonight, he was pulling clever schemes.


Small thing, I believe this is a run-on which you can easily fix by replacing the comma with a period, semicolon, or adding a conjunction after it.

He could tell, it made a distinct noise.


Same thing here c:

Was he listening to a council meeting? He’d never gotten the chance to do that!


Oh no, what's going to happen now xD

Sure, it was forbidden, but what was Margaretta going to do? Get a wine class out of some bottom cabinet she never used?


Did he jinx it? :o

He wasn’t entirely clear, everyone seemed uncomfortable when he asked, and only gave him vague answers.


You don't really need a comma after "asked"

And the paths to the fallen kingdoms have been worn out.


Small thing, I believe "worn out" should be hyphenated

Then he heard a murmur. He recognised the spell for a floating light too late and froze when a soft ivory glow filled the kitchen and entry space.


UH OH

“I’m sorry mum,”


"mum" should be capitalized since it's being used as a name

It wouldn’t be so bad. Except that she’d be gone.


Awww </3 (I feel like half of my reviews at this point are broken hearts xD)

Okay, and that's it! It was another bittersweet chapter, but Cassius overhearing the council meeting was quite interesting! Haha, I found it funny how he was hiding in a cabinet; that must've sucked xD And I love his character, because I feel that there's more to him than just his pranks and silliness. We're getting to learn a lot about the characters, which is really nice!! As always, I'm excited to read more, and I hope this helped! :D

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kaitlyn
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kaitlyn wrote a review Review · Jun 19, 2020

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Halfway point for today,

First Impression: Now that's intriguing. So these fake heirs have not been discovered yet. And the kids are totally in the dark. Also nice bit of exposition there.

But after Isa had caught him trying to enchant Margaretta’s book, after he’d been sitting idle with no ideas besides putting bugs in food, he wanted to do something.


Two "after"'s seem a bit much. I think that could be rephrased a bit.

He’d be way too tall to fit in the cabinet if he was anything like Mishal.


Love this very subtle way of describing the character.

Also this door is never locked is it. For the study of someone who runs this whole place it seems to lack security.

“After Jax’s utter failure you mean.” He didn’t recognise that voice. One of the scholars. Couldn’t tell which one.


I'm assuming that this means they either don't know he was actually told not to kill that baby or Jax actually failed to steal the baby.

“Some might feel betrayed.” Head physician and alchemy professor, Gracia. She was the only one who sounded reasonably calm. “Some might underestimate, or misunderstand, the reprehensions. Glacier’s Keep will be isolated if word gets out that the girl, Princess Kanta, doesn’t have trueblood. Everyone knows the legends of what happened to the kingdoms that lost their trueblood rulers.”


This Princess Kanta seems like something that wouldn't be said in a normal conversation because I am pretty sure all the people in the room should know that name.

“You’re relying heavily on the idea that the King and Queen will be content to sit idly by,” the unfamiliar scholar said, tone rather nasty. “What about this expedition? It won’t go unnoticed. You are bringing, not just one, but two of the heirs into the open. The north will be looking for its lost princess, but let’s put that aside. Summermount is one of the most powerful kingdoms of the five, if the boy is taken notice of—”


So is there a way that these heirs can be identified? It doesn't seem so because the fake ones haven't been revealed as fake yet.

“They’re aware,” Margaretta said. “This meeting is adjourned. I’m sure all of us would like to retire for the evening.”


That was a quick dismissal. Why do I get the feeling that Margaretta hasn't told them anything?

Why now? They had all grown up in the Chronicler’s Guild. They were supposed to stick together, supposed to grow up and become boring historians or whatever, but they were supposed to do it together.


Wait so all the children just accepted this. None of them have dreams of doing something else?

His mother was in her nightgown, dark brown hair braided in thick knots over her shoulder. She was holding the light in his palm but blew it into the air without looking away from him.


Why do I get the feeling that these parents don't know a whole lot either?

She let him go and he peered up at her, then ducked his head. “I’m sorry mum,” he said, soft and sincere. He wished he’d just been able to fall asleep, like a normal person, and hadn’t heard the council meeting at all. “I love you.”

Her hand brushed his cheek gently. “I love you too, Rascal. Go to bed, you’ll be exhausted tomorrow. We’re going to have a talk about you sneaking out, you know.”

He let her help him out of his coat even though he was definitely old enough to take off his own coat, thanks. And yeah, yeah, he would stop sneaking out, he’d been restless and couldn’t sleep and needed something to do.


That's a lovely interaction between the two.

And that's it.

Overall: Don't think I saw much wrong this chapter. It's pretty well written and you're building a really complex world. We don't know much yet but it promises to be an exciting plot. I do hope we get to the beginning of that expedition soon though.

As always take what you think helps and forget the rest.

Stay Safe
Harry

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Panikos wrote a review Review · Jan 16, 2020

Hi again! So, this chapter has actually made me remember that I did read the prologue to this story way back when. I remember Margaretta and Jax all taking the true heirs away and...replacing them, I believe? Which is a really neat setup for a story, but I'm so much more invested in it now that I know and like all the characters involved. I think my verdict on the prologue was that it was a bit long-winded and gave away some details that would be better held back. The fact that I had no trouble following this chapter suggests to me that you might not need a prologue at all. Realising that a lot of these characters are actually royal heirs is, in my opinion, way too awesome a twist to give away in at the beginning of the novel.

Anyhow, let's talk about this chapter. Basically, I loved it. This is definitely my favourite one so far. You capture Cassius's character brilliantly and you do so well to adapt your narration style to reflect his POV. There's a nice depth to his actions as well - he's a prankster and a troublemaker and clearly quite immature, but I think the way he fixates on Mishal and compares himself to him (particularly in the bit where he says he's glad he isn't as tall as him) makes me think there's real insecurity in him too. I wonder if there's a lot of things about Mishal that he's envious of, and he deliberately antagonises him because he doesn't want to admit to that jealousy.

The conversation he overhears is pretty heavy on exposition, but it's handled in such a way that it stays interesting. It might be a touch overlong, but all the stuff about the trueblood heirs and how much they need to keep them hidden really had me rapt. I'm surprised that Cassius didn't manage to put the blocks together and at least speculate that Isa and Mishal were the 'lost princess' and 'boy' they were talking about. It seemed kind of obvious to me, seeing as they'd mentioned the expedition only a sentence or so earlier. I guess Cassius isn't the sharpest when it comes to things like that, but it might be worth making the dialogue just a little more subtle, just so that we don't feel like Cassius is completely missing the obvious.

I'm also a little surprised that it's only just occurred to him that the expedition might be dangerous. Maybe it's because the last chapter dedicated so much time to discussing it, but it feels like I've been inundated with reminders that the ruins are cursed/haunted/perilous. How has Cassius not heard this?

Overall, I think my main pointers for this chapter would be to just tighten up the meeting a little bit (there's quite a lot of back-and-forth), make the dialogue slightly more subtle, and address why Cassius is only now realising that the expedition is dangerous. I really did enjoy this chapter a lot, though. I love the mystery and the whole question of what it means to have trueblood. I want to know how it relates to the ruins. You did a great job showing Cassius's POV in the writing style, as well as characterising him and giving us a sense of how he deals with things. I also love his relationship with his mum - she seems super cool!

Keep writing! :D
~Pan

hey! thanks for your reviews!! I really appreciate them (I'm just,, bad at responding,,)

I definitely agree this conversation was a little too blatant, but I've got such a bad habit of being way too vague sometimes and then nobody knows what's happening, and I think I leaned into trying to correct that too much.

I'm glad you enjoyed it though! and again, thank you for your reviews, they're very helpful :D

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JabberHut wrote a review Review · Nov 13, 2019

Omg we got SO MUCH GOOD INFORMATION HERE.

First of all, I really like how we get into Cassius a bit more and how he operates. He's quite the prankster, but he never does it out of spite. It's always fun and for the people he cares about, people who understand him and his antics and how he operates and what he means. Plus, it works super well that he'd be the kind of kid who can't always sleep well, too full of energy and not knowing what to do with it.

Plus his narration voice is just perfect. You do such a good job adapting narration voice to all these different perspectives.

So I thought it was REALLY interesting that Cassius' narration actually made mention of Cassius being suspicious about them being the trubloods. It was never 100% confirmed, of course, but the fact that he came to this conclusion beforehand and tried asking about it is really interesting. That implies this has been suspicion for a while, but perhaps an unpopular opinion/topic with his friends and family. I still found it interesting that he already thought up this hypothesis before and drew upon the possible correlation while eavesdropping here.

I'm impressed the kingdom will still be looking for their trueblood heirs. It's been several years, and I would imagine they'd have pronounced them dead or at least not put so much effort into finding them. Then again, it sounds like it's an almost urgent matter having a proper trueblood heir at home, so we'll probably learn more about that later.

AND OOOH THE PRINCE OF SUMMERMOUNT. His coming of age isn't for another year. My gut is telling me this is Mishal as he'll be out in the open and vulnerable to others noticing his existence, as opposed to Rowan who is a year younger than them and not going. Plus, Rowan is gender neutral, so I don't think it's them. Definitely Mishal. ohgodnotmishal ;.;

I love that not only this meeting goes into some of the superstitions and politics behind the scenes, but also that Margaretta herself recognizes this is what's being discussed and ends it in a pinch due to the waste of her time. We get insight into some history while also getting a strong sense of duty and authority from Margaretta.

It's so INTRIGUING. What could Margaretta and these scholars possibly want from the ruins?! The truebloods are the keys to this curse, but it's all still such a mystery! What will happen to the other kingdoms without their trueblood heirs? Will they fall just like the fallen kingdom Isadora and Mishal are going to investigate? There are so many factors here, and I'm excited to see how it all falls into place!!

I was SO WORRIED this chapter was too exposition heavy but my heart is SO FULL reading how exciting you are and absorbing all this!! alksjdalk

So I thought it was REALLY interesting that Cassius' narration actually made mention of Cassius being suspicious about them being the trubloods.


OKAY so I'm actually wondering if I hadn't written the prologue, if this would have come up?? I probably just didn't write it well. Cassius doesn't think they're the truebloods, he's just noticed that nobody will talk in detail about them? He also did not know the truebloods weren't in their respective kingdoms until this council meeting. Which brings me to:

I'm impressed the kingdom will still be looking for their trueblood heirs.


ALSO WHOOPS ON MY PART I had dialogue written down that would have probably cleared this up but I didn't add it. my bad! yeah, the kingdoms aren't looking for the trueblooded children, cause they don't know they're missing? I realise I... did not mention that's something that none of the kingdoms would know. Only Glacier's Keep was looking because they didn't have a child to swap with Alanna, so she just went missing and the kingdom freaked out about it.

Everything else I'm !!!! I love hearing all your thoughts and speculations??? amazing :'D

I'M SORRY FOR THE CONFUSION but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! aaa <33

Ohhh, I think I just read that sentence differently, then.

Truebloods? He had never quite grasped the concept of destined rulers. Was that what they were?


"They" could have meant either way, and I think I just took it the wrong way. XD It makes sense reading it as Cassius drawing a connection between "destined rulers" and "truebloods" instead of a connection between "truebloods" and himself/his friends.

And at this point, I really appreciated the prologue for giving me enough background information to read this chapter. There's a LOT of information here, but having been exposed to some of this to an extent helped a whole bunch, otherwise it would've been too much to take in, I think.

This also makes sense about Glacier's Keep! Maybe it had been long enough that I didn't remember this detail (VERY likely), so it could have slipped my mind. I certainly was unable to draw that particular connection and am more apt to blame my memory banks than your writing. Considering how much is in this meeting, though, it probably would help to bring it into perspective by mentioning this if it doesn't bog down the flow too much or reveal information too soon.

Anyhow, thanks so much for the clarification!! Sorry for my silly absent-minded remarks. :D <33

OH I definitely see where you're coming from. I didn't even think about how that could have a double meaning xD

Oh, gotcha! That's helpful to know! cool :D

Absolutely fine! I just wanted that to be clear for like, future reference? Haha but no it's good! it helps me to know what I need to be more clear about in the future, so really, any and all thoughts are helpful! <33



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