Hello Rascalover! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
Of course, my mind went to the gutter while reading this.
On a side note, I spelled "asleep" wrong and it autocorrected it to the other word for "donkey" XD
Overall:
Overall, I liked, but you need to be careful when writing about things like this. People's minds could go to the gutter pfft. Keep up the great work!!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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