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Aoow, this was a really sweet poem, very emotional and all! I liked it alot. Great rythm and flow... maybe think about puntuation? Otherwise. "High Five*
This is my favorite stanza.. it feels very.. Real, or something like that
"A broken home
A mother left behind, old and alone
A brother lost and out of control"
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
Beautiful and at the same time very emotional as well. I really enjoyed reading it and even though I can't necessarily relate to a lot of what's in it..I can relate to the part about growing up and missing out on things...or missing the things you did before but can't do now.
I didn't see anything wrong and felt this one was better than the one you wrote about your brother.