Misery At It's Finest

I quite liked this, and you reflected the way I perceive today's generation almost perfectly. One thing that did bother me was the fact that you used correct grammar and you capitalized your lines; however, you then proceeded to not use any punctuation whatsoever. My advice, is that when a poem looks this neat and structured, punctuation should be elementary.
Aside from that detail, it's really great, and I think you've done a fantastic job.

Hi,

I enjoyed the couplet format here. "Cloudy excuses/mild muses" was great and the final couplet was very effective.

"It's" in the title should be "Its" as you do not need an apostrophe to show possession for the word it. I'd change "party and booze" to "partying and boozing" as it makes more sense as a sentence, and I'd change "Way back when
Life was simple " as it's a bit cliche and doesn't show the same attention to language as couplet three.

Hope this helps,

Jas

Thank you

Excellent poem! I loved it. It made perfect sense to me, maby because I feel just like this sometimes.

That’s what I wish for
Times of real living and breathing