ooh way to give a unique poem with some thought-provoking content!
I don't have anything to fault you on except a few grammatical errors:
"story's" in the third line first stanza should read "stories"
"dammed" should read "damned"
...really, if you wanted to (I know the site gives it a red squiggly line) I think it would read nicer if you made 'fairy_tale' one word. Just my opinion.
That's really about it...
Yeah. Really cool poem!
Keep it up
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