Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,859 Literary Works • 673,694 Reviews
I like the fact of how it rhymed, is showed a graceful distribution of deep words showing emotion.
Quite impressive, qara! There is a lot of feeling in this piece... and I can feel it! The realization of getting the same repetitive unpleasant feelings again is very hard indeed.
There is very good usage of words here and a lot of emphasis has been laid on the persona's emotion. The poem isn't too long or tedious and engages the reader and leaves an impact on the mind as well. Nice job and well done. Keep the ink flowing!
XD
i like this poem but i can see why you and your friend took it different ways. It could relate to a person who has returned to a physical place where they were once hurt but it could also about someone who has harmed themselves in some way or another. In both cases it takes with knowledge as though you have been through it. I think that is good, it gives you a wider audience and also you feel as though you can relate to it. I think it is also rather brave to talk about such a hard subject. I agree with your friend, i wouldn't extend it because it gets the message across in a few lines which is great.
i think this line shows the two different interpretations but all together impressive poem. I find it very admirable.