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Very interesting read here. I like the idea and it was well-executed. And I agree with what the person a few posts before me said, the stanzas are much easier on the eyes. I learned that one the hard way. Stanzas help the flow as well, so this works very well.
Great choice of words and the flow was very good. I don't think I would change anything at the moment.
A very good write! Well done!
Keep writing!
-Greena
Qara!
XD
Sometimes we all feel that we are much less than what we truly are and start beating ourselves up about it. It's not about the number of times you fall down, but it's about how you can pick yourself up and continue walking. It's very easy to undermine one's own potential. But what matters is that we should continue believing and keeping the faith, not just in God but in ourselves as well. So don't you forget it, young lady! XD
A neat poem with a great message for encouragement! I know how close you are to God, so I'm sure you'll do perfectly fine!
Murtuza,
I took one look t the poem and decided it was too daunting to read, maybe split it up into stanzas that would be so much easier on the eyes, and it wouldn't scare me away O.o
I liked this! Maybe a bit to long so it drags on. But good. Describing words were OKAYISH!
Hope this helped. WELL DONE!
7/10