At least now I know

I am in love with this.
Short and heartbreaking and it hit close to home.

Hello, fellow Bamboozler ^_^

I really liked this poem I didn't quite get it, but all the same, I thought it was great, there was good emotion, and an interesting perspective, but I think it has much more potential, as I read it I think: innocent of what? What did this person do? What's the truth? Answer these questions and it could be much better

Nitpicks:

qaralynn wrote:I can hear your words
But their meanings don't reach me.
I stare at your tears this line sort of ruins the flow, and is only five syllables compared to eight syllable one below, try adding some more description to fatten it up
And ignore the 'Please forgive me.'

I always thought you were innocent
But sadly there's another side to you. meh, this line is a bit boring for me, we get that this person has done something wrong, try make it a little more interesting XD
A side that's far from pleasant
And it tears me apart. another flow thingy

Maybe I'm the one who's been blind
Or perhaps I just didn't want to see
That underneath that huggable outside <3 cool line
awaits a sharp pair of teeth

I wish we could turn it all back,
But at least now I know the truth.. great ending ^_^

And ignore the "Please forgive me."

Out of all the poems i have read today I think this one is my favorite so far!

*Hitting like*

Keep Writing,
~FW~

I really like this poem. As a matter of fact so far I like all of your poems. But in this one I have a bit of a problem. You say "beyond" pleasant in one phrase but I think you should use "from" instead. "Beyond pleasant" would be even more pleasant, but "from pleasant" would be like "far from" and I think that makes more sense with what you are trying to say. Other than that, this poem is great and I love it.