This window I'm staring through
It is covered in thick dirt
And now the world behind it
is filled with so much hurt.
I'm crying out for someone to help me
Please clean my window and polish the glass
So that the sun can shine through again
And the world behind it will fill with happiness.
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You are on a roll today! Very nice poem!
I love how the second stanza alludes to the second one.
Just some punctuation. Keep up the good work!
Once again, simple yet great! My only urk is that 'glass' and 'happiness' don't seem to rhyme very well. Other than that, Great work!
*Sniff*
I just figured out what it really is that I like about your poems. They are emotionally touching to me!
Keep it up!
~FW~