Hello dear!
This poem is exteremley beautiful. Even without a traditional rhyme scheme, it still seems so lyrical. The subject of flower meanings is so incredibley complex that it could be a language all in its own. You weave that language so fluidly into the normal english of the story. I feel as though you but a ton of research and thought into the meanings of each flower you incorperated into the poem.
I feel as though my one probelm is that it seems to start in the middle of a poem. I don't know if that makes sense, but it just doesn't feel like a beginning stanza, but one you'd find in the middle. It is still a really amazingly constructed line, it jusy feels rather rushed.
But again that is only one criticism I seem to have for this and I think that's great. I'm so glad you decided to share this with us. I cannot wait to read more of your work later. Please keep writing!
Points: 35
Reviews: 22
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