restless
The word ringed in her ears,
again
restless
and again.
restless
She was a wandering spirit,
seeking out the light.
The light was the empty pages
and the pen in her hand.
Why are you restless?
Because I have a story inside of me,
and it's clawing its way out.
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I love this poem!! It's short but conveys an important message. I feel that many people can relate to it, as almost all of us hold untold stories inside ourselves.
The word 'restless' and its repetition perfectly describe that feeling of frustration, when you just want to burst out with what you feel.
'Because I have a story inside of me,
and it's clawing its way out.'
I love this part. The way I interpret it, it seems as if keeping it all in is painful, the story imprisoned inside. It's been kept in for far too long and now has lost all control, trying to claw it's way out.
I can't wait for the next chapter!! You've written a great poem!!
Thanks!
AliceAfternoon, this is amazing!
I can relate to this poem! You've written it in a really perfect manner and it's short but carries a great meaning. You let your readers figure out the situation. And you did a great job there. I really like this series, it's fun and amazing to read. (sorry, I'm really not good at reviewing poems, but I just had to review this one!!)
You always make the reader eager to read the next one!!!!
I really can't wait to read the next poem.
Never stop writing and have an amazing day!!
writerkitty
Thanks!
Hey Alice!
This was awesome! Fantastic job there, but do you mind not always leaving us readers at a cliffy. I mean it's really...we'll it's frustrating, caz when you leave something amazing in the middle, then it really keeps clawing at your brain or atleast it happens to me.
Anyway this was really gooooood! I loved it.
Hope to see the next chapter soon....
Untill then keep up the good work!
With love,
FanGirl~
P.s.- this is my 100th review! Wohooooo!!!
Sorry this got posted by mistake :p