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This is beautiful! You really get a chill down your spine when reading it. Great job!
Thank you
Wow! This was very beautiful. Despite the sadness of the poem, I think you painted a very clear picture. It's like sad, yet assuring at the same time. Very good job. Keep it up
Thank you so much for your complement Greg!
This is a beautiful poem. I loved it. I just found that it was a bit hard to read with all commas and no fullstops. Also, separating it into stanzas also helps.
Keep Writing!
-Angel
Okay! I will take your advice and your comments and fix it up! Thank you for the comment.
Such a sad poem, such emotion. This could almost be a song if you rearranged it differently.One thing that would make it easier to read is if you could put it in stanzas but otherwise beautiful.
Thank you. I have one poem that is rather long that was made as a song rather than a poem.
If you get to read this comment, take note please. If you loved or liked "Tears of an Angel" i would also like you to find the poem "The Funeral" for it is much like this one. Thank you!