My Life

by demib

Published March 24, 2012

In Poetry Folder

My life
My life is black and white,
My world is colorblind.

Forest gray,
Water white,
Pain sharp,
Heart dull.

Agony tears through me,
I cry for help,
But none comes,
For no one is there.

Empty this world is,
My life,
Is black and white,
My world is colorblind.
 
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Caesar commented Comment · Mar 25, 2012

'Empty this world is'... Hey, Yoda! :)
The poem is cool.

demib replied · Mar 26, 2012

thanks! i love yoda



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