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Great!
But you need to add more lines or another stanza. I like the structure. Your poem is organized, but it needs more
Happy Writing,
Chris
Short and good I suppose but it is a bit vague but anyway it is good. But one thing, this piece of poem does not look like a piece it rather looks like a part of some other piece and you might want to change that but other than that good work Keep Writing!!