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Hey Demib!
Your poem is really great! It carried alot of emotion, a thing I admire in a poem. It also has a really good plot; I had never considered any of the questions your poem asks. Your poem teased my mind and emotions, all at once.
My only complaint is that in the last stanza, third line, you wrote 'necassary'-- it should be 'necessary'.
Keep writing!
~Shady
Yes i wasnt quite sure i spelt that right. I thank you for pointing that out.