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I didn't think this poem was really very graphic. If you really want to read a graphic poem that can both disgust and amaze you I have many of those. But the concept of this poem is good, though your execution somewhat more humorous than you probably intended. I understand where the hatred comes from, but the way you have written this poem almost makes it seem as though you are trying to make us laugh at the monsters.
I guess you can put it that way. It would be cool to make a poem about laughing at monsters. Hehehehe