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Love the idea! Beautifully written, perfectly choosing the right words for each sentence. The end was a bit confusing but a solid poem
at times the poem lacked a bit of passion and the fear of being hunted... However, I loved the fact that in the stanzas you repeated 'I', it really made a difference and add so much effect to the whole 'monster' idea.also, another positive note is that you never waffled on or made the poem get dull - always interesting sentences! Finally, you're poem was truly scary. You are great at creating suspense and thrills, especially when you put 'I will find you'! Really a pleasure to read. A great piece of work!
Thanks!
I dont know what were you trying to imply in your poem. The poem needs more detail. It looks like you didnt put in enough material that is needed for a great poem. You did recalled all you were trying to say in a pile at the end so we can see what we missed but i did not understand perhaps give a better description?
Ya i wasnt quite sure what i wanted either but thanks for the review