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Hello Tuesday here for a review. I like the say this poem is impressive and I enjoyed the imagery you used in this poem, as it could give the reader a chance to see the things you wrote here. Also the metaphor for what you have used here, which could be the pain of trying to talk to someone and seeing that person having to go. I also enjoyed the simple similes you used into this poem (that could be used for a message or something.)
This poem is quite beautiful. I mean if I read it over some more, I don't see anything wrong with it (and I know reviews are meant for the sake of pointing out things that need to be changed and whatnot) but this poem seems to be perfect. I enjoyed the little similes, imagery you used in this poem, and the meaning within in this poem. Good job.
Sorry for this short review and hopefully, I get to review more of your work.
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Tuesday
Hey AF! Scar here to review you poetry~
Wow. I really like this, AF. It's short, but that works. It flows really well, and your imagery is really interesting. I like how you start off with this;
and then you seem to go from nervous to guilt to shame (I think?) and I like it. I like how it progresses. I also love how you use
at the end of each four-line stanza, and repeat it. It's an interesting pattern.
AF, you're truly amazing and I'm afraid I don't have anything to suggest, because it's just that good. I would love to see more poetry from you, and I am definitely click like as soo as I've hit submit!
Remember; keep it up and never stop writing!
~Scar. <3
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Hey, yo, Ancientforever! Strangelove here on this PokeReview Day and I have a somewhat of a quick review for you!
As you already know, I like this poem. I found the subject matter a weird twist to something that is a common subject. In better words, I found this interesting. It was original, yet it wasn't original. It was a weird stalemate. Good stuff first.
This felt fluent. It wasn't choppy. It ran straight through in a river formation. I guess, a lot of it worked well. Is this a great poem? No. I have nothing much to say, really. So, NOW FOR THE BAD STUFF!
The whole idea. It has been through the mill and ran again and again and again. It wasn't that original, to be honest. The (somewhat) twist you threw on there is interesting, but the idea.
Usually, I see narrators complaining about lying and stuff. This narrator had to lie. I liked that fact. It made me smile, and it was somewhat original.
Overall, good job.
Strange gives you..
8.1/10
Good job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
#TeamPlasmaStruck
The premise of this poem seems to be that we repress our emotions. The author believes that if we were less reluctant to release our emotions, we would uneestand one another and eachother better. They regret not trying harder to change thier relationships for the better. And they punish themselves for self pity. In the end they find that sadness snd disapointment envelops them and blows thier good qualities away. Good structure and grammer. Keep writing.
I feel as if this poem describes my life so well at the moment. Even thought I'm a graduate, I feel as if things were left unsaid after leaving school and stuff like that. This poem is making me think right now. This poem could be between two friends or two lovers even. I just love how this poem speaks generally instead of sticking to one thing because it brings a variety of readers to thinking about a topic like this. Nicely done, friend.