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Don't Give Up on Life

by FallenAngel97


Your task in life may be small
But that doesn’t make you
Any less important than
Anyone else in the world
 
You may not see it
But God surely does
Though you may not be a hero
You are his precious child
 
He created you for a reason
Though sometimes it’s hard to believe
But if you trust and have faith in him
He will guide you where you need to go
 
Don’t give up on life
Even if life gives up on you
Because there is more to life
More than what you are living
 
Go out and witness to someone
Save a soul from Hell
Share with them your Testimony
Before it is too late
 
Things happen unexpectedly
Sometimes bad, sometimes good
But life will go on
So you have to make the best of it
 
Don’t be afraid of death
For it’s not a bad thing at all
The day I die and go to Heaven
Shall be the happiest time of all


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Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:33 pm
manisha says...



a very positive story filtering a universal truth in simple but completely elegant form. I really like the flow.

Don’t give up on life
Even if life gives up on you
Because there is more to life
More than what you are living


love these lines!

-manisha




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IKnowAll says...



This is amazing! I feel a sense of hope reading it, and I wasn't even sad or anything before reading it.




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Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:42 am
Stellabeam says...



Beautiful poem, enriched with your faith and religion. You talk about death and salvation together and make give them meaning.





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