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awesome poem,
this poem is really cool. i love it especially this part:
"But one cold and snowy morning
A man finally sees the child
Shivering violently, his teeth chattering
And offers the child his coat
He says, "Come with me, my child, and you shall no longer be alone"
The child smiles up at him, his heart filling with joy
His prayers have been answered
He will no longer sleep in alleys
For his Saviour has finally come"\
i love it
keep writing