M.O.T.H.E.R.S.

by FallenAngel97

Published May 13, 2012

In Poetry

They make Mistakes
They learn from them
They are Optimistic
They see the glass half full
They Teach life lessons
That you can learn from no one else
They are Heroes 
In their childrens eyes
They are Excellent at giving hugs
They are Respectable 
In every single way
They Show us how to live
And that's why they're so special 
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guineapiggirl wrote a review Review · May 13, 2012

Very nice...
The sort of thing that you could have inside a Mother's Day card.
I like the bit about making mistakes; that's not such a traditional Mother view.
Not sure about Optimistic. It doesn't seem essentially Mother-ry, and not all Mother's are. Granted, not all Mother's are all of the things on this list. I suppose you're talking about GOOD mothers.
Something you really have to correct- 'In their childrens eyes'. You need an apostrophe in their- the eyes belong to the children :D



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