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Hi!
I'm Maddy and I'm here to review for you :3
First; This is a fantastic piece. Easy to relate to, easy to read, easy to picture a writer going through. That's the thing about it though, it just seems way too easy. Your word choice is so simple, I would love to see you spice it up with a few more sense-enhancing words, you know? Maybe add some more complex properties to it, make it so its not extremely easy. Other than that, I really enjoyed the read. Keep it up!
Happy writing!
thats true
yep
What inspired this? It's a really nice poem!
My entire life -_-
And thanks!