The Messenger knight here to review for KotGR.
So I was actually quite excited when I saw the description and began reading. I haven't seen any poems before written Shakespearean way, and this one was pretty good. The oldness of it made it seem very real, and the use of bigger, older words always helps because it adds maturity to the poem. Now, I am not to good at punctuation so I don't know if you had any mistakes in that regard, but in your second-to-last line you have "star-glit
Typo:) But the only one I saw so good job. I look forward to seeing more of these types of poems, and I think you can write them quite well.
Keep it up!
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