Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language and mature content.
I see you've a condom left,
Right there on your shelf.
How about you use it,
And go fuck yourself.
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PonyzandPokez here reviewing you poem
Woah girl calm down!
Spelling: 100%
Grammar: 100%
Emotion: 1000%
Formatting: 90%
Good job! Your emotion went off the charts and I loved it, I could feel the anger in the poem! What I liked most about it was that you were still able to be wordy even though you had a very strong mood about this guy. Amazing!
~PonyzandPokez
Hey, Strange here and I have a review for you!
First off, I'm really screwed up when it comes to humor. This has some pretty dark humor, though it isn't aimed to be a comedy. This is straight out blunt. It's ridiculously strong. Emotion shows in this short poem. I think this is a great poem.
There is one problem though.
This won't make the spotlight.
This deserves to be on the spotlight. It sends a message all right. I loved this so much.... Heck I loved this more than string cheese, and I sure love my string cheese. Due to the fact it has profanity, I don't think it'll make it up there. Trust me. If it does I would be amazed and excited.
Overall, I gave you an actual round of applause. I literally just clapped multiple times.
Also, you've should be you have.
Strange gives you....
10/10!
Fantastic job!
Keep writing
Stay groovy!
-BOOMSTICK APPROVAL-
I'm not surprised you would love this, it's definately your humor!
You know what, I want it on the spotlight too.
Wow, this is a *very* short but powerful poem. This can be a poem that shows the thoughts of an angry girlfriend or maybe even an angry wife. With the shortness of this poem, it leaves what has happened before this poem up to the reader. It is well done, and the poem flowed from one sentence to the next. It is a good well done, even if the topic itself is a bit mature for most. I would like to give you a figurative round of applause. Good job and keep writing.
~From the Reviewing Ming of GreenTulip.
Oh sorry I'll get my review up in just a second.