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Is as constant as rain
Falling where it will
Coming and going
Drowning and blinding or
Light and leaving you cold.
Infatuation
Is as subtle as a hurricane
Raging over land and sea
Heart and mind
Overwhelming the senses
Leaving devastation in its path.
True Love
Is as ambiguous as a river.
True Love
Is as direct as a flame.
True Love
Is as proud as a pauper,
As negative as a proton,
As jarring as a feather.
As ultimately satisfying as a good cookie.
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This is a succinct lyrical literary work about a crush, an infatuation, and true love. It's straightforward and understandable full of similes and metaphors. Each section of comparison to a simile or metaphor can be interpreted with ease. Though it may seem in-depth and analytical, these similes and metaphors to a crush, an infatuation, and true love is fairly digestible, its intentions of conveying what a crush, an infatuation, and true love is, is recognizable and hopefully easy to identify. Simple and sweet, to the point. I like it.
- Lil, aka HalfheartedAmateur
It was more of a description of differences, not really a pro/con thing--With just a hint of sarcasm thrown in, just for the heck of it.
Your title hooked me, so I had to read this. I'll admit I was expecting some more humor, which didn't come. However, I did like this- although I wasn't completely sure whether this is "pro" crush or against it. Are you saying true love is good or bad? Or are you just saying you can't be sure?