Hmm...
Sadness is what comes to my mind...
I like the poem, though the top two lines almost fight, to me anyways....
I like the whole poem, and I hope it was a little longer, so we could feel the emotions, and wants, etc....
Overall it's nicely done!
Well, nice job!
Happy Review Day 2013 June!
Thanks!
Team Fire Flower!
pegasusgirl2
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