Hi YWS!
As many of you already know, I've been accepted to the United States Military Academy at West Point and will leave to begin basic training ("Beast Barracks") June 30th. That doesn't leave me a lot of time to do the normal kid thing, and once I go, there will be a six to seven week period of zero Internet availability, then a much smaller window of time for me to come play here. This summer will be the longest time I've gone without YWS since I joined here three years ago, as a wee freshman.
ERGO,
I want to go on a major critiquing spree before I go. I was hoping to do a nifty thing where I complete 100 reviews in my remaining 100 days. Then I counted and realized that I actually had 111 days to go, but 111 reviews doesn't really have as nice a ring to it, plus I'm all over the place this month with traveling (Chicago and Italy ftw!) and academic competitions (empress of Current Events, Persuasive Speaking, Duet Acting, and Original Oratory, pa-shaw!). And I missed the critiquing weekend. *holds out wrist* Yes, you may all slap my wrist.
And you may also leave your critique requests here. I do better with fiction than with poetry, although I will critique both. And I love dialogue, so if you have chunks and chunks of descriptive prose (a la Tolkien) then please make sure it's good chunks and chunks of descriptive prose, or I will be sad and stare at the screen in despair, wondering what I ever did that was so wrong that I had to critique one piece after another, filled with descriptive prose. *dramatic sigh*
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaand... I think that's all. Leave me a link to your pieces here; I'll keep a running list in this message to mark my progress. Thanks guys!
Pieces Critiqued
Updated 06/10/08
100. Broken Bones, by Firestarter [03/31/08]
99. Cal's Contest: TIOBS, by TL G-Wooster [03/31/08]
98. Teeth, a horror story, by valiant [04/07/08]
97. Jack's NaPoWriMo Thread, by Firestarter [04/07/08]
96. Foreign Markets: 1x01 "Pilot / Alpha Dogs", by Incandescence [04/11/08]
95. Foreign Markets: 1x02 "The Package", by Incandescence [04/11/08]
94. Anniversary, by GingerLizzy [04/11/08]
93. Truth's Dawning, by Smiley [04/11/08]
92. For Matty, by JFW1415 [04/13/08]
91. Fantasizing, by JFW1415 [04/13/08]
90. Bits and Pieces: Agatha, by Suzanne [04/13/08]
89. Pandora's Box, by Snoink [04/20/08]
88. oreo, by omggdariannnn [04/20/08]
87. The things I do for Love, by babyboymilky [04/20/08]
86. Pictures of Victoria, by Mortality [04/21/08]
85. I could talk to you forever, by Alice [04/24/08]
84. Foreign Markets: 1x03 "Clubfoot", by Incandescence [04/24/08]
83. Foreign Markets: 1x04 "Swollen Grapes", by Incandescence [04/24/08]
82. Foreign Markets: 1x05 "Between a Rock and a Hard Place", by Incandescence [04/24/08]
81. And We All Go The Same Way Home, by Saint Razorblade [04/24/08]
80. Self Portrait, by OverEasy [04/24/08]
79. City Underground, by yoha_ahoy [04/27/08]
78. Misty Morning Flowers, by Sacred [04/27/08]
77. Benedict's Goodbye, by Jennafina [06/02/08]
76. The Romantic Writer, by ~Volant~ [06/02/08]
75. Sister of Mine, by chocoholic [06/05/08]
74. The Sundress, by elephantwalrus [06/09/08]
73. God Still Loves You (1), by Suzanne [06/09/08]
72. Missa Nautica (for Cal's Contest), by Sam [06/09/08]
71. God Still Loves You (2), by Suzanne [06/09/08]
70. Gerrymandering (1), by Sam [06/09/08]
69. Sunset, by lit-chick-4evaa [06/09/08]
68. Gerrymandering (2), by Sam [06/09/08]
67. God Still Loves You (3), by Suzanne [06/09/08]
66. Two Shakes of A Lamb's Tail, by Trident [06/09/08]
65. God Still Loves You (4), by Suzanne [06/09/08]
64. Long Line, Sweetheart, by Trident [06/09/08]
63. StoweAway #1, by BigBadBear [06/10/08]
62. Bruises (Drunken Alcoholic), by Sportgurl46 [06/10/08]
61. Cooties, by Monki [06/10/08]
60. One Fall, by chocoholic [06/11/08]
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Gender:
Points: 17580
Reviews: 798