Just fading away

Greetings, TheOtakuLord! :) What grasped my attention the moment I started reading was the beautiful language you used. Phrases like until day and night could no longer be told apart ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review this for my final RevMo review. :D So, I think this is cool, and overall works pretty well. I was really ...

Hey there, Snehaaneginhal, and a big (super big!) welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you love it here, which I'm sure you will. :) Though this piece was ...

This is really good. And now I'm going to try to review it. I enjoyed this a lot, even though I don't usually read thriller. I like your main character ...

Hi there! From reading your story, I've found some minor changes that have to do with your organization. You have some conversations that i think should be separated into smaller ...

Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review this today. I kind of have a soft spot for these sorts of letters that tell a story because when done ...

Jason has started something big...something that will change the face of their wolrd.

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Clara Arabella Black @Remington38 After Dumbledore's welcome message, we all chowed down to our feasts. The Trio gobbled up their food as I took my time savoring each delectable item ...

Philip Masterson @NicoleBri @Gravity READ THE POST THOROUGHLY BEFORE SAYING ANYTHING. Philip isn't sure what he wants, but he knows he needs to fix things, patch them up. And he ...

Written for a class. Will explain further in comments.

Hello All, Good day! Looking at things which amazed me, inspired me, overwhelmed me as well held me at tough times I started writing. Its been some while I have ...

...not sure why I felt the need to write this.

Hello @EternalRain! Thank you for the kind welcome. I didn't think anybody would actually read my post! Haha. :) I really like your quotes, particularly the All Time Low quote. ...

This is adorable. I like May, her being so painfully shy is relatable to me, honestly. But I don't try to make friends, she's desperate for some. I think it's ...