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Re: (1) Snippets from my WIP, 'Five Emerge'
by NerdTrash6000 in Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction


Re: The Sorrowful Hopes of a Sinful Man
by Lily708 in Poetry » Romantic


Re: Richard & Rebecca: Chapter Three -Safety-
by Mea in Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction


Re: Fall From Grace: Chapter 1: Ari and Winter
by CharlotteS in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


Re: time
by Lily708 in Poetry » General


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    (1) Snippets from my WIP, 'Five Emerge'

    Hello! It's a pleasure to meet you. Today, I will review your WIP, to give you some pointers and extra tips. This particular piece of work is very intriguing and ...

    NerdTrash6000
    NerdTrash6000 - 51 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    The Sorrowful Hopes of a Sinful Man

    Hey,JBangsgaard!! Lily here for a review.It's a really good poem that actually drags you into imagination and puts you into the writer's pathetic situation.Loved the way you showed your misery ...

    Lily708
    Lily708 - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic
    Richard & Rebecca: Chapter Three -Safety-

    Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a quick review today. I'm not really sold on your spelling of Magickian. It's just hard to read, and although magick is ...

    Mea
    Mea - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Fall From Grace: Chapter 1: Ari and Winter

    Wow. Where to start with this. It was amazing. From the very first word you had me drawn in, picturing everything that was happening. Your characters were completely believable and ...

    CharlotteS
    CharlotteS - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    time

    Hey,Lily here for a review. You got me frozen buddy. It was just Awesome!!!! The stanzas which kept fading until the end...really speaks of how merciless time can be. Anyways ...

    Lily708
    Lily708 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    dear happy

    Hey,Amelie. It's lily here for a review.And I think this is the first poem of yours I'm reviewing. It's a good poem!!!...Seriously we never get enough of being 'happy'.We can ...

    Lily708
    Lily708 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    a simple word

    Hey,Anngelalu!! Lily here for a review. A good poem..one of the shortest poems I read.It's kinda humorous though..if related to homework(in your description) or drinking milk as in my case ...

    Lily708
    Lily708 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Who I Am

    I want to review this but I don't really know how! I can relate to this a lot in my own way. That's what I like about it, it's a ...

    Dracula
    Dracula - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    A School Girl's Ring

    Hey there, JustALittleBarry! I liked the overall tone of this poem, it flows well. It seems to me that you started a new line with each new 'subject' (the ring, ...

    Dracula
    Dracula - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    you can be king again - 1.2

    Hey Ashnirai! It's Quill, here with a quick review! I haven't read any of your other chapters, so take all of this with a grain of salt! I'm usually very ...

    GoldenQuill
    GoldenQuill - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy
    Scolopendra chapter 5

    Hey Storm, it's Quill, here with a quick review! Obviously, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so take this review with a grain of salt. Also, I tend ...

    GoldenQuill
    GoldenQuill - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    The Name Carver.

    Hey alexblackwell! Dr Lavender here to do a quick review for you! Let's get into this! It was first grade and you did something no one ever dared to; You ...

    DrLavender
    DrLavender - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    birds.

    Hey art99! DrLavender here to do a quick review for you! I hope you may find my notes to be of some use to you. The song has yet to ...

    DrLavender
    DrLavender - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, General
    Perspectives

    Hey Empires! DrLavender here to do a review for you! Let's get into this - I'm going to be going by each passage. My father taught me what a long ...

    DrLavender
    DrLavender - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Politics
    First 2,000 Words of an Unnamed Project

    Hey there on this wonderful Review Day! This is really good! You have a good sense of pace, and pretty good descriptions in this. There are a couple of mistakes ...

    KAL
    KAL - 4 hours ago


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