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March 2023 Review Day

Last 5 Reviews

It's the March 2023 Review Day! Thus, the last five reviews are being shown.

Re: The wizards and the desk pets 1:the stolen magic-chapters 4&5
by Snoink in Novel / Chapter » Humor


Re: The Wizards and the Desk Pets 1-the stolen magic-chapter 3
by Snoink in Novel / Chapter » Humor


Re: living tomb (valentine's day is a graveyard)
by LadySpark in Poetry » Health


Re: Where I used to be
by lliyah in Poetry » Spiritual


Re: The Last Spell 1.1
by Stringbean in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    The wizards and the desk pets 1:the stolen magic-chapters 4&5

    WAIT. THEY DIDN'T ATTACK THE MENACING FIGURE?? ...I am admittedly disappointed by this, haha. (He was right there, gahhhh!!) I also wish you had described him leaving, since that seems ...

    Snoink
    Snoink - 24 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    The Wizards and the Desk Pets 1-the stolen magic-chapter 3

    Hello! I am back for more... who is going to steal Cheyenne's magic??? WE SHALL FIND OUT THIS MYSTERY SOON!!!! She started walking towards the door very quickly, and said: ...

    Snoink
    Snoink - 40 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Health, Narrative
    living tomb (valentine's day is a graveyard)

    Hi friend! Here for a quick review :) First off, LOVE the recorded version. I hope you continue to do that, because it's excellent and really adds color and depth ...

    LadySpark
    LadySpark - 42 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    Where I used to be

    Hey dragonnight! I'm a very spiritual and religious person myself, so was super pleased to see a little religious poetry here. Sometimes that takes a little courage to post in ...

    lliyah
    lliyah - 54 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    The Last Spell 1.1

    Hey, Silv, here as promised! You said you want to trim so you don't end up with "the quintessential early 21st century literary work," so that's what I'll try to ...

    Stringbean
    Stringbean - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    The Wizards and the desk pets 1: The stolen magic-chapters 1,&2

    Okay, so I haven't read Accidental Magic! BUT. I saw this chapter sitting idly and figured I would read this! :) She got angry, and well- Boom. The guilty one ...

    Snoink
    Snoink - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Health, Narrative
    living tomb (valentine's day is a graveyard)

    Hi tatteredbones! I'm going to do my best to give this a review, because you did a fantastic job with this poem. If you ever get a chance, you should ...

    Elinor
    Elinor - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, General
    devotio

    Hello! RandomTalks here with a short review! This was such a delightful read! And I say delightful (despite the tragic ending) because the story genuinely took me by surprise, as ...

    RandomTalks
    RandomTalks - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Bubblegum

    Wow! The metaphor of "swallowing bubble gum" to social anxiety is a very unique and compelling one - it seems like the speaker sort of "lost their voice" because of ...

    lliyah
    lliyah - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Bubblegum

    Hi Summer! :) This is definitely some new imagery that I've encountered! Bubblegum is so sticky and makes it harder to speak. Plus, if you swallow it wrong, it can ...

    Snoink
    Snoink - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Bubblegum

    Hi summerdepressionexe! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give you a quick review. I enjoyed this convey what the speaker is feeling. I found ...

    Elinor
    Elinor - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Supernatural
    Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 5

    I’m listening to Dinah Shore songs right now to get the vibe of the story and I like it! Now, onto the chapter. It’s sad that even her brother slammed ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy
    Romance of the Dead

    Hello! I’m gonna leave a brief review! I really love the use of short sentences and foreshadowing, it really leaves the reader wondering who this man is and wondering if ...

    SinsOfTheSaints
    SinsOfTheSaints - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Script » Humor, Supernatural
    Unfinished Business

    Hello this is Foxmaster!!!🦊 Tis was a very original idea. I liked it a lot and all the characters At rise: ROWAN, a college student, sleeps downstage left. Somewhere, a ...

    foxmaster
    foxmaster - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    cardboard castles

    Hey, this is Summerdepressionexe; I have a quick review for you. This piece is beautifully disjointed. It doesn't have much in the form of an overarching 'plot,' but it all ...

    summerdepressionexe
    summerdepressionexe - 7 hours ago


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