Is it a song? Is it a poem? I have no clue but hey it has a bit of woe in a cheery format

Very powerful, intense poem. With just a few lines, you managed to convey all of the pain and intensity behind such a dramatic moment. I think you do a really ...

Hey, GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review. First off, I applaud your efforts. Writing rap is not everyone's cup of tea and you have managed it extremely well. Even as I ...

The body's urging in ending its miserable existence.

The lab blows up.

Lots of explosions and machine guns.

Alice learns something unexpected.

@NicoleBri - Kate can room with Mia!

Things are moving so fast! It really built up quick to a fast-paced chase scene. Zoltar really handled Emerald and Felistia pretty dang well. I was super impressed, like normally ...

I really liked your poem. It was short and had a good impact. The theme you chose was very relatable and had a good message. It described our inclination to ...

I liked how short you kept each line. It looked very neat! I like how concise each line is, which helped me keep a flowing rhythm going while I read ...

Zero is not the precursor, but the center of the infinite set of values used to quantify the world. Or, a set of magical girls beat the last boss.

Hello once again! This is coming a bit later than I intended (sorry about that!) - I got sick and was having trouble focusing. But, feeling all better now and ...

Hey Demora, My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to review your poem. I really enjoyed reading this. It reminded me of an old love song ...

Heya Doss! Hope you're doing well today or tonight, depending on what side of the world you're on. I'm here to review this piece - and obviously find out what ...

This is interesting, and its clear that you know where you want to go with it, however, I feel like a lot of your thoughts here are unfinished. make sure ...