It's to moment of truth. Viper's first time in battle. Will he die? Warning lots of blood.

Hi Konijnje Rodger here for a quick review, first of all 'Wow!!!!' This is so touching. Thank you for making this review very very easy for me, because it is ...

Hey, Saen! Small Comments “Guards-” “They're not from Telorum,” Lira hurriedly cut him off . Taking a protective step in front of both Aspen and Cass, Lira looked back [as] ...

Hi again! I'm still between books so it looks like I'm going to review on my commute instead while I wait for Amazon to bring me the one that I ...

Hello there. This is my fiftieth review of RevMo, which I was not expecting to finish at all. Anyway, this review is very late, but at least it's here now. ...

Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very late in its arrival, but it's here now. First off, I think you should have given yourself more time ...

Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed its flight and ended up very far from this story. First off, I think that the poems do not ...

Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop thirteen years ago. First off, I feel that the blocky paragraphs, especially the third one, ...

Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review, even if it's landing rather late. First off, I guess pixie/fairy stories all have the same roots since there are ...

Hey Pan! Back as always and yay I get a Green Room review this time! :D Honestly, I know you're concerned about moving the plot along and us getting answers, ...

Supernatural healing and bets

This is based off of something I recently went through. Feel free to rip it apart, I'm not really satisfied with it.

Hi! So some suggestions. Grammar wise, be consistent with capitalization and punctuation. There are lots of little lines that just need grammar fixed and they would flow better. I love ...

This is part one of this story. I really want to expand on it. However, I am having some writer's block so I would LOVE some suggestions. Thank you!

Hey danni88! Happy revmo! :) I haven't read the previous chapters, so I apologise for not being able to comment much in the way of anything relevant to that, or ...

Ok. First off, THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I believe you are speaking of a shadow but at the same time describing the daily battle of our minds. Did I interpret ...