Hi there! I saw nothing wrong with this chapter. I really liked it, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed it until now. You balance really well between being descriptive, but ...

Hi there! I am really, really looking forward to more! This is a really engaging chapter! So I'm afraid that I don't have much critiquing to offer, as I didn't ...

Hi there! So this is an interesting chapter, if not a little creepy. :D. I like that though. I don't have anything to suggest, really. I only noticed that one ...

Hi there! This such a cute story! I love how simple it is without being to simple. This story is very easy for the reader to feel and understand. I ...

Hi there! This poems speaks a lot and is good. I am going to jump right into this review and break it down step by step. This first line: "So ...

Hi there! This is a cute story! I like it. :). There is one sentence that I would change up a bit. This one: “Guys, come on. If we fly ...

Hey Light! I'm finally here for a review. :D I know it's been a while, but I definitely haven't abandoned this story. I'm not quite sure what to say about ...

How I feel a lot anymore

Here is the DT for the new SB The Gifting! Discord here: I can answer any questions here, or in the discord! I hope you all join, and I hope ...

Based on the universe of "The Gifting" by K. E Ganshert "If science is right, then I am crazy, and crazy is dangerous." Some years into the future, science has ...

Hi there! I'm going to jump right into this review. First off, I love the simplicity of this poem! It helped me feel this poem. As for your question at ...

In which Hildegarde calls Dante and (guess what!) overhears another conversation. (LMS, 2000 words)

"Eww! Thor! You got boogies on it!" Alai points to the carrot, and the boogers on it.

In which Hildegarde wakes up with a hangover. (LMS, 1252 words)

I've not seen welcome to Night Vale but from a general tips perspective, there are a lot of ways to make a scene visually interesting. The first one is costumes ...

I love this chapter. I don't even know what to say about it except that I love it. Have I mentioned I wish this was a published book already? Finding ...