Hi, I'm new here so I'm not quite sure how a review is supposed to work on this website but I'm going to for it. First things first, it is ...

@TriSARAHtops: Are you going to Kuala Lumpur? ooo:

Elena is instead induced into a game of cat and mouse by the man who kidnapped her mother. Bound by secrecy, she must complete seven tasks.

Sorry, @Mage, but I gave Lily a cat. XD Spook is more of a shared cat in the organisation though... I think.

Sorry guys! I've been busy the past few days and haven't had much time to work on the post. But it should be done by tonight!

That might work, but I'm not sure. The best way to do it is to go to "Edit Storybook" and add the peeps yourself. Since I'm a mod and have ...

Bodhi Jameson Bodhi checked his phone: no new messages. It was midday. He sprawled on the bed mattress, his lower body tangled in blankets, one arm hanging over the side ...

Hey there williamk16, welcome to YWS! Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks As the words were spoken I was hooked, I would change 'was' to 'became' Every word ...

Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. Its very sweet that you've dedicated this poem to your beloved Chloe. I like that. Like gxldencrxwns said, the last line ...

This story. Okay so HBC jumpin right in on this review. This boy must really, really like Candace. He realized she wasn't as happy as she could be in a ...

Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. As Sarah24 said, your work can be rated 12+ instead of 18+ because you swore only once. It contained all the ...

I just took the time to read your story twice. People all over the world have had to deal with the fear of a situation like this. Not being able ...

First off, I want to say that this was pretty interesting to read and I like a lot of the points you made. Most of my critique is word usage ...

HBCScribbles speeding by for a review! *tips hat* Howdy! I love music, and I love positivity. And as I first glanced at your work, I saw how positive it was. ...

Hey there bvbAngel, Myjaspercat here again to write you another review you've got to stand to fight you've got to fail to succeed [place a period here] you've got to ...

Apologies for the shortness of the post; I'll be on vacation without a computer for the next week, and I couldn't finish my audition post in time. So, I'll just ...