In which the team receives their assignment.

I'm excited that your second part is out. Good work. You did well working the emotion into the story. Experiment with more creative words to make it even more colorful ...

Not bad for a first poem. You've taken on a task that I don't see accomplished much in actually writing a rhyming poem. Some of your words are creative. However, ...

First of all can I just say I am in literal love with your title!!!!!!!!!! I am writing a book that is based on the stars and I.... I don't ...

Love is like a rose...

Just a short poem about... well, I'll let you draw your own conclusions.

The Library was smaller than Alliyah had thought it would be, and there was an odd smell - slightly smoky and acidic, Alliyah thought to herself that "stardust" would be ...

Already you have built this very visual fantasy world. I loved how you talked about magic like it's a life force. Here you said: She'd heard them arguing for a ...

Hello there, lindzwrites! Dreamy here to give a short review. This is wonderfully written. I got really into it. It was interesting and made me very curious about this Mademoiselle. ...

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In which our narrator goes back to the house, and some uncanny things occur. (LMS, 1048 words)

Hi! First off, I love this poem. The rhythm is great and I'm always impressed when people can figure out rhymes such as these. There's just one stanza in particular ...

UH. UH. ALANNA? WHY ALANNA? Because she's young or is sHE SPECIAL?? WHY ALANNA? Okay, FIRST OF ALL. Ember is adorable and I love her already. She is spunky, I ...

I love how nice everyone is. Sometimes I get the feeling I can't say anything on the internet without being judged, but this place is different. Here, I feel I ...

Hey Brianna! I'm here to review your poem! There's a lot of good imagery here! You do a very good job painting a visual picture of what's going on without ...

Hello, Annie here to leave you with a short review! First of all, I really enjoy this poem. To see relationships with people as something that is delicate like a ...