Young Writers Society

rewrite of an older poem of mine

Me: *realizes I have no black pens*

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Ooh yay! I actually enjoyed this, and am liking the direction that this is going. it's going to be a ...

Hey friend! You asked about how you could make this better and I wanted to write you a response to that! I rewrote part of your poem. Maybe this can ...

David by me 2.jpg David from The Many Buried Things of Peter Shaughnessy , by me! Also probably I should've said this upthread, but all this art was done with ...

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! (GREETING & INTRODUCTION) Hey friend!! Ellie here again for a review of your wonderful poetry :) Let's get right into ...

Siya here with a quick review. I adore your work. It truly sums up the frustration felt but most authors when the catch the dreaded writers block. I'm no expert ...

10/01: Dream

It hurts when your partner puts distance between you, when all you want is to rent a one bedroom apartment in their heart.

so this is what happens when you have an overactive imagination as a thirteen year old writer haha

"A light appeared, like a giant / firefly resting by / the dark river."

this is a really interesting exploration of self-discovery. i think your usage of symbolism throughout is compelling. youve set a solid timeline here. your first stanza is the foundation with ...

@keystrings Thanks for sharing! That sounds like that might be good to try.

to create a world from dust/that is what it means to be our own deities

Hey there! First off, I'll use the YSW critique style of a critique sandwich. I am finding it helpful to write reviews. I have also found when YSW-ers have used ...

A dream of celestial skies.