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On Cigarettes and Limerence
by niteowl in Poetry » Narrative


The Little Man
by josephgrantson in Short Story » General


Fields of Oak
by Aley in Poetry » Romantic


The Lost Dragon 6.1
by soundofmind in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


I Drank in the Light That Day
by Snazzy in Poetry » Narrative


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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 9

    It's to moment of truth. Viper's first time in battle. Will he die? Warning lots of blood.

    Shikora
    Shikora - 48 minutes ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    When Pink Turns Blue

    Hi Konijnje Rodger here for a quick review, first of all 'Wow!!!!' This is so touching. Thank you for making this review very very easy for me, because it is ...

    Rodger
    Rodger - 55 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    The Three Lockets [Chapter 4.2]

    Hey, Saen! Small Comments “Guards-” “They're not from Telorum,” Lira hurriedly cut him off . Taking a protective step in front of both Aspen and Cass, Lira looked back [as] ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy
    The Predecessors: Chapter One

    Hi again! I'm still between books so it looks like I'm going to review on my commute instead while I wait for Amazon to bring me the one that I ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Solo Qui (Only Here)

    Hello there. This is my fiftieth review of RevMo, which I was not expecting to finish at all. Anyway, this review is very late, but at least it's here now. ...

    concord
    concord - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Romantic, General
    Little Lies

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very late in its arrival, but it's here now. First off, I think you should have given yourself more time ...

    concord
    concord - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Science Fiction, General
    I Scare Myself...

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed its flight and ended up very far from this story. First off, I think that the poems do not ...

    concord
    concord - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Romantic, General
    the softest sigh

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop thirteen years ago. First off, I feel that the blocky paragraphs, especially the third one, ...

    concord
    concord - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, General
    The Human Side of Things

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review, even if it's landing rather late. First off, I guess pixie/fairy stories all have the same roots since there are ...

    concord
    concord - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 7

    Hey Pan! Back as always and yay I get a Green Room review this time! :D Honestly, I know you're concerned about moving the plot along and us getting answers, ...

    Mea
    Mea - 7 hours ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Before the Dragon - Chapter 12 (LMS IV)

    Supernatural healing and bets

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 8 hours ago

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    When Pink Turns Blue

    This is based off of something I recently went through. Feel free to rip it apart, I'm not really satisfied with it.

    Konijnje
    Konijnje - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Her Plight

    Hi! So some suggestions. Grammar wise, be consistent with capitalization and punctuation. There are lots of little lines that just need grammar fixed and they would flow better. I love ...

    hermione2001
    hermione2001 - 9 hours ago

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic
    The Day the World Fell Apart

    This is part one of this story. I really want to expand on it. However, I am having some writer's block so I would LOVE some suggestions. Thank you!

    hermione2001
    hermione2001 - 10 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Moonlight: Chapter Six

    Hey danni88! Happy revmo! :) I haven't read the previous chapters, so I apologise for not being able to comment much in the way of anything relevant to that, or ...

    scribbleinks
    scribbleinks - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, General
    Daylight Companion

    Ok. First off, THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I believe you are speaking of a shadow but at the same time describing the daily battle of our minds. Did I interpret ...

    hermione2001
    hermione2001 - 10 hours ago


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