This is just something I wrote quickly that highlights our feelings of jealousy and the want to be someone else. Please let me know what you think.
I stood, staring at my sister. She was my twin, my other half. Everything was exactly the same. Our flowing dirty blonde hair, our misty grey eyes and pink lips. There was no difference between my olive skin and hers, nor my oval face or hers. The clothes we wore didn’t differ in anything. We both wore the ripped jeans and tight shirt. The black hoops we wore in our ears looked so similar it wasn’t funny. Our nail polish was applied in exactly the same way.
My sister and I looked the same, but we were not. When I looked at us, she was the beautiful one, and I was the ugly duckling. But how could that be? We were so similar we were basically one person.
I watched her chest fall up and down as she breathed. Slowly, I closed my eyes and blocked her from my view. But I couldn’t. Her image was printed in my eyes. When I closed them and entered darkness, all I could see was my sister, hands on hips and no smile on her pretty face.
My eyes snapped open, and I tried to look beneath our physical appearances. She was the perfect one, never getting in trouble. I was the bad one, always mucking up. She would never cheat on a test, skip school and stay up all night at some party drinking. And my sister would never do what I did and get pregnant.
How could one person be so perfect, yet so terrible? Everybody loved her but me. I wanted to kill her. The girl in front of me, I just wanted to murder her. Not bothering to suppress my rage, I struck out and punched her. I turned away from my twin and ran into the bathroom. I was going to kill my sister, if it was the last thing I ever did. Sobbing, I turned on the tap in the bath and grabbed a knife. I screamed out in pain as I slit my wrists and climbed into the bath, fully-clothed.
My sister died as I slid into unconsciousness. Never again would I see my sister, my reflection.
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