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Please critique!Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:09 pm -

Just a poem i wrote not the best thoughTue Jan 13, 2009 5:28 am -

This is just a poem that I threw together one night in about 3 minutes (and I'm not exactly the bes…Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:56 am -
It hurts to remember I can see all that I did bluntly wrong "Why can't you love Me?" And the other …Mon Jan 12, 2009 4:23 am -

Clock strikes twelve , midnight swells Evening spits bright lights . Twinkle and shine down onto my…Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:25 pm -

I wish I could see you breathe again, I still cry every now and then. Your death hit me so fast lik…Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:04 pm -

A poem that needs a lot of work... help me?Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:34 pm -
(surreal)Sat Jan 10, 2009 9:56 pm -

[/b]A slightly ambiguous if not somewhat sketchy jotting that I wrote in five minutes. An example o…Sat Jan 10, 2009 1:52 pm -

a new ideaFri Jan 09, 2009 10:35 pm -

...and physics?Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:53 am -

She is my phoenix, rising from the ashes of the old year, a past life, a neglected child. She is a …Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:12 pm -

Just a little random something :) First submitionThu Jan 08, 2009 3:42 pm -

For the simple poetry contestThu Jan 08, 2009 1:43 am -

This is for Princess's and Demeter's old-fashioned poetry contest. It has to be about a random obje…Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:00 am -

PoemTue Jan 06, 2009 4:08 pm -
When you look out into the ocean You might think what lives below When you search through the fores…Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:28 pm -

Version 1 and Version 2 posted hereTue Jan 06, 2009 6:22 am -

A poem about pancakes.Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:07 am -

Mrs. Moth, you are So beautiful. Your tender, smooth Skin is like temptation on the wing. Your larg…Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:02 am -

Tell me what you think.Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:39 pm -

to all you book worms.Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:25 am -

all you need to know about me told in a poemSun Jan 04, 2009 8:46 pm -

just a little bit macabreSun Jan 04, 2009 3:41 pm -
For a contest...Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:25 pm -
The moon shepherdess slarlight, starbright sheep of the moon thy wool on a spool of thy shepherdess…Sat Jan 03, 2009 3:21 pm -

A cinquainFri Jan 02, 2009 8:33 pm -
i'm not given't it away! you need to red it!Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:19 am -

Would love crits... just written today.Fri Jan 02, 2009 12:16 am -

This is based on a fight my exboyfriend and I had.Thu Jan 01, 2009 11:58 pm -

Hahira's Twilight I listen to the train blare, As twilight darkens the day I look up and see the sk…Thu Jan 01, 2009 5:39 pm -

I just wrote this a few minutes ago. :D Please don’t run. You won’t be late. Love’s too strong, To …Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:48 am -
Chapped Eating the dandruff scabs off my head my eyes are watering from nonexistent onions or emoti…Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:43 am -

(If you knew my town it might be easier to appreciate, but I still need advice on stanzas, word cho…Wed Dec 31, 2008 1:58 am -
wishing time would stop in life...Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:19 am -

Forgotten Snuggled in grasses Tickled by weather Her writing is fading As if carved by a feather He…Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:47 am -

a prose poemMon Dec 29, 2008 11:24 pm -

Truckly Views A driveway, by any other name, is a portal to human existence. A vehicle placed in da…Mon Dec 29, 2008 9:30 pm -

A box is all that surrounds me, a cage is my home. I watch the birds fly, as free as can be. I long…Mon Dec 29, 2008 4:32 am -

This is true about Austin Harrington...written 12/15/08Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:42 pm -

Square digs. My subconscious vomited this, has one expletiveFri Dec 26, 2008 11:35 pm -

You can all go fuck yourselves. In fact, you can fuck yourself up your asses. Take your foot, inser…Fri Dec 26, 2008 1:33 am -

an attempt at sonnetryThu Dec 25, 2008 11:14 pm -

arrogance is no excuse I walked in the halls waltzed, really, in and out of consciousness observing…Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:37 pm -

Okay, after getting (awesome!) critique, I decided to edit this poem. Hopefully, it's changed for t…Tue Dec 23, 2008 4:08 am -

Taking a testMon Dec 22, 2008 5:24 pm -

A light poemSun Dec 21, 2008 11:04 pm -

Be brutal. Really. Take the whip to it. Or an AK-47.Sun Dec 21, 2008 9:33 pm -

sorry no longer posted.Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:13 pm -
this is a poem that i wrote in 7th grade Will You "Will you hold me when im down will you kiss me w…Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:53 pm
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