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sorry no longer posted.Sat Dec 20, 2008 7:47 pm -

i've posted this before but i didnt get a reliable answer I called and then again i tried until the…Sat Dec 20, 2008 7:41 pm -

"Do you really want me to critique this? It's really really bad The worst poem I ever read I kind o…Fri Dec 19, 2008 11:57 pm -

Drifting on soft clouds, Lies a city of love. Its frantic heart beat is that of a family. A family …Fri Dec 19, 2008 8:48 pm -

My Life is a canvas Your Love is my paint Let your brush stroke me I'm open and blank Every time yo…Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:04 pm -

The BoyThu Dec 18, 2008 12:54 am -

A poem I wrote about a close friend of mine.Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:53 pm -

She leaves an evil residue as she creeps down the halls. Out of the dreadful school, I'm the one sh…Wed Dec 17, 2008 2:17 pm -

a strange thing, indeedWed Dec 17, 2008 2:07 pm -

She said "I'm gonna get out of here some day" And he said "Yeah you'll find a way to leave me behin…Tue Dec 16, 2008 6:34 pm -

I wrote two sentences in my journal every day, this is whaTue Dec 16, 2008 6:29 pm -

Dedicated to Austin HarringtonTue Dec 16, 2008 6:10 pm -

[/b]In my head, a boy I see. But in my dreams, he's next to me. He makes me happy when I am sad. I …Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:15 am -

First Poem. second online :)Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:26 pm -
Impetuous, Industriously Plagiarizing engineers lose sight of what is right, we're losing sight of …Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:20 pm -

my exboyfriendMon Dec 15, 2008 12:16 am -

poem i wrote in 2 min about pain and enemiesSun Dec 14, 2008 6:53 pm -

the time has come he said of trials of tribulations of kings of deserts of mountains and of oceans …Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:40 am -

Little white men are invading, They are graceful and frozen in flight, Little white men are invadin…Sun Dec 14, 2008 3:40 am -

inspired by a trip to california.Sun Dec 14, 2008 12:03 am -

First attempt at a - well - sort of love poemSat Dec 13, 2008 2:32 pm -

Please Critique! (but not too harshly)Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:05 am -

For young and old.... females preferredFri Dec 12, 2008 8:10 pm -

If I die tomorrow, Will the memories fade to gray? Will all of this confusion Ever have something t…Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:37 am -

vanity and a confused relationship: Rip it to shreds then.Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:24 am -
A poem that needs to be critiquedFri Dec 12, 2008 1:43 am -

A little satire on high school relationships...Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:23 am -

take a look, take a look, i got the skill to write a book i've climbed a fence i've biked a few mil…Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:13 am -
1. PLZ REVIEW 2. wrote this after talking to my dadTue Dec 09, 2008 11:18 pm -

inspired by a statue of a sleeping angelTue Dec 09, 2008 6:11 pm -

a poem, after a long absence from d forumTue Dec 09, 2008 10:28 am -

Just a few Haikus I did for fun. "Morning Peace" Sleeping quietly. Bothering no one at all. Snoink …Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:21 am -

PLEASE CRITIQUE!!!!Mon Dec 08, 2008 6:52 pm -

Love- A simple four letter word, Always said, but is it ever meant or heard? It's always thrown aro…Mon Dec 08, 2008 1:09 pm -

Please Critique!Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:30 am -
when life gives you lemons.... you can squeeze them in your friends eyes you can squeeze them in yo…Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:54 am -

a poem for HIM..Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:15 am -

I nvisible forces that bind me to you, are - L ike selfish vines, thorns that inxtoicate me with, O…Sat Dec 06, 2008 4:51 pm -

Can it really be true?Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:59 pm -
We will sing this together as we teach the words and learn the ritual Who is willing to give a fath…Sat Dec 06, 2008 1:37 pm -

short poem...Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:21 pm -

This is my first entry: You like me and never want to leave me You lover her and can't ever leave h…Fri Dec 05, 2008 12:33 pm -

I really need some help with this piece.Thu Dec 04, 2008 11:43 pm -

I wasnt sure where to post this.Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:49 pm -

Free form PoemWed Dec 03, 2008 7:00 pm -

Sewers run red with blood. Un-speakable evil’s walk the street. In search of fresh meat. Coated fro…Wed Dec 03, 2008 5:55 pm -

(whoa oh)Wed Dec 03, 2008 3:49 am -

Funny poem.Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:37 pm -

I was bored and this is suppposed to be very childishSun Nov 30, 2008 4:24 pm -

You love to hurt people, it's what you do. It brings you so much pleasure, you hit me to relive you…Sat Nov 29, 2008 9:19 pm
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