Ocelotoscope

Ocelotoscope


Bastard moon dip
evergreen bathtub
faceplant orange tingle
lickety-boom in a
half-cake boondoggle

shama llama twist brown
leaps a pickle lips

randy lemons bowl crypt

prompt analog of fleshy boat
a raucous he could ski

oh no the child is raining
about the thunderous guise
a bowling grin provokes the shoe
and scan-birds farce can string

shambles are but pocket ropes
who scantily flutbeck once
arduous brilliant soak pour
thins too groat sans cleats

a strumpet crease four crapsicles
high slumtenty armpit thatch

stuttering grease fork
monocle wrathful
napkins marching cove

twixteen thirty
ampersand

well, this is an odd one, for sure, I mean, was this for some kind of contest or somehting, because while totally random poems are nice and all, does it have a point?

not to be critical, just curious, you see,

is it bad that actually alot of this made sense to me?
well, I think... no, I don't have any idea what to say about your poem, it was... too random to be able to actually correct, or comment on, seriously.

Peace,
God

point? naw, just like to do surreal stuff sometimes

if you do understand some of it then yes you should worry