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The Deconstruction of Falling Stars As the cradle gently rocks and the fire starts to grow Let ashe…Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:20 pm -
Hey I'm new to this, but was just wondering if you could give your thoughts on this poem and any co…Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:48 am -

Needs critiqueFri Nov 28, 2008 4:29 pm -
What an interesting topic choice. It's pretty good except for the fact that you used the wrong form…Fri Nov 28, 2008 3:26 am -

I Dabble. I dabble in poetry. When the sun rises, I think it's night. The stars are shiny pearls in…Thu Nov 27, 2008 4:23 pm -

please read and review. i need feedback. maybe a new title.Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:50 pm -

I wrote this a 4:47 a.m. :)Thu Nov 27, 2008 1:01 pm -

blah....i was boredThu Nov 27, 2008 3:21 am -

I hope you can see the undercurrent of thought hereWed Nov 26, 2008 4:53 pm -
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:00 am -

Yes, I mean schoolTue Nov 25, 2008 11:10 pm -

A free verse poem about the nature of peopleTue Nov 25, 2008 7:54 pm -

I didn't know where to post thisTue Nov 25, 2008 6:07 pm -
I just wrote this really quick, and I am hoping someone will tell me if its worth going back and ed…Mon Nov 24, 2008 8:22 pm -
PLEASE REVIEW (but not to hard)Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:11 pm -

poem about poetrySun Nov 23, 2008 2:35 am -

- Shush, come on, don’t talk so loudly . > Just see the way she struts. Urgh, so proudly . - I can’…Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:09 am -

Just came up with it.Sun Nov 23, 2008 1:45 am -

what happens...happens....Fri Nov 21, 2008 7:21 pm -

It was raining one day and i was bored so i wrote this!Fri Nov 21, 2008 5:55 am -

My first ever Haiku so, any help is great.Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:08 am -

poem about pain and depression.Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:54 pm -

just some thoughtsThu Nov 20, 2008 6:57 pm -

What a wide-spread beauty, Is the eagle up high. With his wings as gold as sun rays, He glides thro…Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:26 pm -

This is something like my poem untilted, with much editing.Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:04 am -

its one in the morning and I feel really faintWed Nov 19, 2008 11:05 pm -

Just a thought for a poemTue Nov 18, 2008 10:55 pm -

Im not sure. Just decided to write a poem.Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:51 pm -

Escalating giant steps, Eager to reach the top. Adventures await, There's new friends to be made, H…Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:57 pm -

Random PoemTue Nov 18, 2008 7:47 pm -

I dont j=know how to delete stuff!Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:39 am -
i like writing songs as well as stories/books so here you goTue Nov 18, 2008 2:30 am -

Inhaling and exhaling, all that smoke. This is seriously, not a joke. Cigarettes are expensive, don…Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:46 pm -

"The management apologizes for the poor quality of the two dollar strawberry punnets. Most people w…Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:09 pm -
Poison lingers in the air It feeds on despair Shadows of yesterday Have found themselves in light o…Mon Nov 17, 2008 3:39 am -

my works of artMon Nov 17, 2008 12:34 am -

A poem for halloweenSat Nov 15, 2008 10:15 pm -

They gave for their countries, They gave their health and lives, To protect our freedom, From other…Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:07 pm -

Please review it, and do your worst. :]Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:21 pm -

Caught my sight one fortunate night the beauty i never saw , One needed a heart to see it, not thos…Fri Nov 14, 2008 4:08 pm -

I'm lying in my bed.It's late in the night, Through my blue curtains streams soft starlight. I hear…Thu Nov 13, 2008 11:29 am -
I think it was around this time years ago or so it seems late September early November no we met up…Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:50 am -
She cry’s…. …and she cry’s Nothing makes sense anymore She can’t see clearly anymore Her thoughts a…Thu Nov 13, 2008 1:23 am -
(dream of spanish prima donnas―the scent of lilacs) tracing silk silhouettes with trembling finger …Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:09 am -

Autumn As the wind sent wisp of hair around her face The back of her skirt blew up in disgrace Then…Tue Nov 11, 2008 11:50 pm -

Sat beneath a timid tree, Her branches tremble so. The wind bids to sooth me, with gentle winds tha…Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:54 pm -
I hate them For solidifying my invisibility Creating an open barrier of despair upon my life The ig…Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:28 pm -

Happy Birthday Mummy, Your cake was really yummy. You're growing older every year, Mummy, I love yo…Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:21 am -

i like this one. hits home for meSun Nov 16, 2008 6:10 pm -

Never mind its not here anymore.....it wasnt good anyway. :DTue Nov 11, 2008 12:59 am
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