Ok, this is my first piece of work in a while that I thought was pretty decent. My writing has been pretty bad lately, so please critique and tell me what you think. Thank you!
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Two months ago,
you held my hand.
You said you loved me more
than all the sea and land.
You wanted me so badly,
but you were too afraid to ask.
Too afraid to tell the other one,
too afraid to take off your mask.
You still told me you love me
and lied to the other one.
She began to get suspicious,
and finally said, "We're done."
I was as happy as I could be.
You told me you felt the same.
What were you thinking?
All your lies now look so lame.
You told me you loved me
but you lied to the one before.
What would stop you from lying again,
were you just trying to hurt me more?
Now you tell me face to face,
then leave my life forever.
It was just a bunch of lies,
about how we could be together.
You said you did love me,
but now the feelings have gone away.
Your heart now belongs to another,
but my heart is yours to stay.
You made me feel so joyful
and now you make me cry.
The relationship never happened.
It was just a lie.
