His Hand

This piece was really good. It had a lot of repeating lines. I forgot what they were called but this poem was good. I don't get the third paragraph though. I forgot what that was called too. I think it was a stanza or something but anyways yeah I didn't get it. The last line in the paragraph didn't make any sense. But other then that this was a good poem and I see that you are in love. Same here.

loved it!!!

I love the thought and description of this piece, but the flow is somewhat choppy. I would go back and rethink the use of some of the periods and commas. I mean no harm, I am just simply giving you some suggestions. Altogether a good poem, but next time read it aloud so that you can get a feel of it it flows correctly. Great Job and let me know if you need anymore suggestions.

Firstly, I would re-think a lot of the full-stops, I think commas or deletion would make the poem run more smoothly.
Secondly, I would remove the last line of every stanza, the repetition doesn't add anything, I feel.
Lastly, I'd review the whole poem with a 'show not tell' filter. It is always more interesting to be shown something. So rather than tell us 'his grip is strong and firm' describe what it reminds you of? Or whether it has left imprints on your skin, in your mind. I don't know, I just feel like that would make it a more interesting read.
Other than that, there is a nice sentiment behind the poem

Happy new year!

I had a real problem with how choppy this poem is - so many commas, so many full stops. I feel like the tone is so unnatural because you never let a thought flesh out; you kill it off before it has time to mature and flow into other images. The first stanza I thought was especially guilty of this; and it's ironic because its theme is feeling good, naturalness, inevitability - but in fact it felt stuck.

That said, don't feel you can solve this by killing off the grammar. For instance, the first two lines might read "His hand feels good in mine / like its been there my whole life" which, if you remove the line break, just reads like a simple boring sentence. You don't want that - try and be a bit more adventurous with the language you use and the images that they express.

You can definitely do it though! I very much liked the flow of

Clasped and interwoven,
All words left unspoken.

Well, I was instantly intrigued because... it's a love poem. Shameful..

I love the longing the narrator feels to be always holding his hand. It's really cute I don't think there's anything to correct in this except

There is nothing i fear.