Hey ... so, yeah, it's me again
So, I REALLY liked your poem. It's something that i can totally relate to.
The theme wasn't something really different or unique, but the way you wrote it down, I guess, is what I liked.
I feel that the last two lines of your poem, that is, the ending- Why did you leave me?
What did you gain?- could have been better. The ending could have been ....more powerful, I guess. Still, nice work
Please don't feel offended or anything. I think that you did a great job here, but I am just giving my suggestions.
Keep writing, stay amazing
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