Young Writers Society

Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy review day! Let's see what we have here...

Now when I review something, I have to sing it and man, this was awesome! I loved this song to death! One thing that bugged me(it wasn't you) is that the people that reviewed this, didn't even give you advice, they just posted the original, said they liked it and posted it as a review. Ughh! That's just rude! XD Some of the lines were a bit off. If you want to see where it was, just sing it softly to yourself, you'll see exactly where you tripped up a bit.

This was hilarious and went right along with the tune. This really did deserve to be first on the front of the page of YWS. *high fives Wind*. (How come I didn't think of this first? XD) You spelling is great, along with your grammar. One thing that I may advise is that you put a comma where is a slight pause because it helps the reader and singer to know where to stop for a second. (I remember at church today, the singer didn't have music but knew it by heart. She sang it way too fast though XD). Well, this is going to be my new song to sing in the shower! Singing activated! Go! If you are good at singing, then you should totally make a video on youtube of you singing this. (maybe even a music video to go with it XD) Great job, overall. Have a nice review day. Keep calm and keep writing!

This review was brought to you
by Team Rocket.

Hey, WindSailor! Happy review day from Team Plasma! (Or, more fittingly, release your Pokemon, you singy-songy trainer!)

As a kid I've always sang along to the theme when I watched the show, so I loved this so much. I'm not a superstar lyrical reviewer, so bear with me here.

Team on YWS

Good reviews are the test
To help them is our cause

So we will travel across this forum

Looking for works to review

(and)

To improve their writing

Review Day (Gotta review them all) is the greatest thing

Review day, oh, you're a writers friend

we wish you would never end

Review day (gotta review them all) brings the best out in us
a community of love
you review this and I'll review that
(Review Day) Gotta review them all\

Don't let their massive point lead
Tempt you to go to bed

There's not much to review, this is BRILLIANT!!! It should be the official theme song!
Do you mind....?



I wanna be the very best
Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test
To train them is my cause

I will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that's inside

Pokemon gotta catch them all its you and me
I know it's my destiny
Pokemon, oh, you're my best friend
In a world we must defend
Pokemon, a heart so true
Our courage will pull us through

You teach me and I'll teach you
Pokemon, gotta catch 'em all

Every challenge along the way
With courage I will face
I will battle every day
To claim my rightful place

Come with me, the time is right
There's no better team
Arm in arm we'll win the fight
It's always been our dream

Hello there, Zontafer here to review your work!

Rhyming and Words
I read your A/N and I know you did this for fun, but since I'm reviewing this I kind of have to comment on it.
At the start of the parody, the rhyiming was a bit off. I can see you've used 'cause' as in the original song, but because it's not the same lyrics, it doesn't really fit in.

Parody

We want to be the very best

Team on YWS

Good reviews are the test
To help them is our cause

I wanna be the very best,
Like no one ever was.
To catch them all is my real test,
To train them is my cause.

Knight r4 here to review this work. I saw it in the spotlight and decided to review it. I certainly hope this helps you! Go team Rocket! And sort of to Pokemon. But who cares about that? Oh and just as a disclaimer I don't know the Pokemon theme song so I don't know the rhyming...

Review day, oh, you're a writers friend
we wish you would never end

Review day (gotta review them all) brings the best out in us

(Review Day) Gotta review them all\

Just so you know, you spelled parody wrong.

This is totally hilarious! It's also very creative. I had no idea someone can come up with something like this! It is super awesome! I have never really listened to the real pokemon theme song but here is how it goes,


I wanna be the very best,
Like no one ever was.
To catch them all is my real test,
To train them is my cause.

I will travel across the land,
Searching far and wide.
Teach Pokemon to understand
The power that's inside

Pokemon, (gotta catch them all) its you and me
I know its my destiny
Pokemon, oh, you're my best friend
In a world we must defend

Pokemon, (gotta catch them all) a heart so true
Our courage will pull us through
You teach me and I'll teach you
(Po-ke-mon) Gotta catch 'em all

Every challenge along the way
With courage I will face
I will battle every day
To claim my rightful place

Come with me, the time is right
There's no better team
Arm in arm we'll win the fight
It's always been our dream

Pokemon!

(Gotta catch 'em all)

It's you and me
I know it's my destiny

Pokemon!

Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend.

Pokemon!

A heart so true.
Our courage will pull us through.
You teach me and I'll teach you.

Pokemon!

(Gotta catch 'em all)x5

Yeah!

Pokemon!

It's you and me
I know it's my destiny

Pokemon!

Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend.

Pokemon!

A heart so true.
Our courage will pull us through.
You teach me and I'll teach you.

POKEMON!


I just copied and pasted it lol. But good job! You can really compare your song to the actual theme song and it is totally different. Your song rhymed and everything! It is flawless! Good job!