Verse 1
Before time and space
Before the first step of grace
You said You loved me
Before the very first day
Before anything I could say
You said You loved me
Chorus
You loved me then
You love me now
Your love never ends
And it never runs out
From the begginning of time
You reached out Your hand
And showed me a love
I could never understand
Verse 2
Before I prayed to You
Before I accepted the truth
You said You loved me
Before You hung on that tree
And bled and died for me
You said You loved me!
Bridge
Your love reached down
And turned my life around
I will never be the same
Because of Your amazing grace(3x)
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PeanutPhoebe, here for a review!! Wow. AMAZING!!!! My youth pastor writes and publishes songs a lot, and this is as good as one of his. (Which are pretty good) Just... Amazing. the theme is awesome, and I love the repeated "You said You loved me!" The rhyming is very good, and the rhythm the same way. I have no complaints. None. So awesome!! Love the title. Great job!! Keep this up, and you'll be published soon!!
Thanks so much.
Sunshine here to review...
oh by the way, I showed my little brother this and he's very musically inclined, and he just turned it into a rap and is now singing it around the house. I'm pretty sure your intention wasn't for this to be a rap, but he made this sound good as a rap. 
awesome job! And God Bless 
This is so beautiful! I feel like this, if ever preformed, would be #1 on every Christian radio station. I don't know why but this song just speaks to me, in some way I think you just wrote part of Gods answer to one of my prayers..... Well that aside, this is beautiful, well written, I have no nitpicks. It flowed beautifully
Your review just made my day!
Thank you so much!
LOVE THIS
Title: first thing that caught my eye
This was beautifully written and flows very well. The imagery you used was done very well too.
I'm not one to read much about romance or Lyrics for that metter, but this really told an amazing story.
I kinda like the tie in of religion as well. If that's not what you meant to do, I do appologize. But either way, this was done really really well.
Keep writting