Verse 1:
There is but one voice.
There is but one God.
Who I look to for help.
He is our one shield,
Our one strong tower.
He is our God and there is no higher power.
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Chorus:
In You alone I find my strength
My refuge and my everything.
Never will I be alone.
Through Your grace I will run the race,
And to the end I will keep the faith.
Jesus you are my God.
And I will rest in You.
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Verse 2:
There is but one Lord.
There is but one King.
He is the only name I sing.
He is our healer.
He is our provider.
He is my one true burning heart's desire.
Back to Chorus:
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Bridge:
You are the reason that I rise each day.
You are the truth, You are the life, You are the way.
You are my joy, you're the center of my life.
In everything reign supreme oh Christ.
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Jumping right in:
Ease up on the amount of periods you are using. It breaks the flow of the song.
I don't think that the stars (*) are necessary. The "Verse 1", "Verse 2" and "Bridge" really don't need to be there. I'd leave the chorus warning, though.
In the line "Jesus you are my God" I would add a comma after "Jesus".
I like that you seem to be the one person who has written about "God". While I myself am not religious, I love that you decided to show your loyalty by writing a song.
Hey, I really like the whole theme of the song, and how it's based on the one true God!! There isn't really anything that I would change about the words. Thanks for letting me read about what you think of God.
Hi! there WindSailor
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This almost made me cry. It really is, heartwarming. You expressed your innermost thoughts in a very affecting way. I, so like this
HE is Everything
I really agree on this stanza and in every line, actually the whole lyrics is so heartfelt. You have written it wonderfully.
Looking forward to your future works..
Keep on writing
I like this. Not very many people write about God on this site.
There's nothing really that needs to be nitpicked at, except for one part.
"Who I look to for help."
If you put 'up' in there, so it's, "Who I look up to for help."
Your don't need to put that in, either way it's fine.
Thank you for sharing this with us.