This very day
Five Years Ago
I used this laptop
To let my feelings flow
Googled a website for writers who are young,
A website, where writers and thrive and grow
From writing on a A-Cloudless-Night TO choosing between Medical-or-Engineering-or-Law-
From Dancing in the The-Rain- to travelling to The-Valley-of-the-Mist-
Catching The-Rajdhani-Express to reach the The-Daughter-Of-The-Raj
Making a couple of Friends and learning to Fight- The-Shadow-
Drinking A-Cup-Of-Coffee- and seeing the Birds- fly away
It looks like after all these five years, A The-Circle- has indeed been drawn, But there is more to come as it is in the Young Writers Society I find The-Threshold-Of-Happiness .
A VERY VERY BIG THANK YOU YOUNG WRITERS SOCIETY. Trust me, you have no idea how much you have helped me grow as an author, writer and poet.
Thanks again.
#5YearsatYWS
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Hi!
Firstly, congratulations for being on YWS for so long! I’ve only been on YWS for about three days, so five years seems like a million centuries (I don’t feel like doing the math on how many years that is)!
I want to point out how well it rhymes! The whole thing just flows; it’ beautiful! I don’t really get why some of the is highlighted, but that’s probably just my inexperience on this website. Are they titles of other works you’ve posted over the years? I’m not sure, but then again, you can blame that on my inexperience.
I love the beginning, it makes it seem like this whole thing is some sort of ancient tale with dramatic music in the background. It adds so much authenticity (is that the word?).
-Rana Noodles
Yes these are the works that I've posted here
Thank you!
And Best of Luck for YWS
Ah this is a pretty sweet tribute to the site on your cake day! Congrats on being on YWS for 5 years, it looks like you've certainly written a lot. I think you could integrate some of the titles a bit better into the poem - like the first two didn't quite fit I don' think, but I really like how you put the last two titles in with "the Circle has indeed been drawn" and "The Threshold of Happiness".
Overall, it's a joyful piece that takes a look at where you've been and honestly sort of inspires me to want to make the same type of piece with titles of old poems I've written on the site.
Thanks for sharing! Glad you're a fan of YWS because it's a pretty awesome site!
best,
alliyah
Thanks for the comment!
Great!!!!!
Great!!!!!