Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek, here to review another amazing piece of literacy and beat the Werewolves once and for all! For the Witches shall win in the end! But before that happens, I am going to help you improve your writing as a whole and improve you as a Young Writer in the process. Of this I am certain. I like all literacy, regardless of what genre or subject it is falls under. When I review your work, this will become apparent to you. Are you ready? Let's begin the review!
I really appreciate this poem because it makes me feel like the poet who is writing this is seeing loss left and right and up and down and wants to make things better, but does not know how. The sun is the god and the nation in this case, but they are not helping things like they are supposed to. They should be making things better for everyone, but instead, they are taking away from people the little that they already have. They have risked their lives for the sun and the nation, but it has all been in vain once the sun and the nation have refused to help them in any way, shape, or form. The mother loses her child to this war, and so does everyone who tries to stand up for what is right. This is a good way of putting how the world does not repay kindness, but it awards loss. Thanks for your time!
-ZeldaIsShiek
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