Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek, here to review another amazing piece of literacy and beat the Werewolves once and for all! For the Witches shall win in the end! But before that happens, I am going to help you improve your writing as a whole and improve you as a Young Writer in the process. Of this I am certain. I like all literacy, regardless of what genre or subject it is falls under. When I review your work, this will become apparent to you. Are you ready? Let's begin the review!
I love this poem because it experiences the true celestial beauty contained right outside of our homes. All we have to do is glance up at the stars, and there they are, the most beautiful objects known to mankind; stars! They are ur hope, our wishes, our life, our love, and our warmth. The stars are a way for us to ast out our rods of consciousness and reel in the fish of beauty, and what is more beautiful than that of the Gods? Truly, this poem, especially the part about crying, is a quintessential representation of the true beauty contained in the stars above the clouds. Thank you for writing such a perfect masterpiece and a beautiful representation of what stars really mean to us, and what messages they send us through the whispers of beauty they send.
-ZeldaIsShiek
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