Hey Ishan212!!
I really love this poem of yours!
One thing I'd like to suggest is that in the following sentence: "Will you now leaving," I couldn't understand what you were trying to express. You might want to change that so it'll be easier to understand for me and other people.
I understand your feelings towards this teacher of yours, Ishan212. I went through it too.
Keep on writing!
~Liberty500
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