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I actually preferred the one with the clarinet...
Are you trying to project a slow homicide onto me by making me read this poem? Because that's what you're doing...
how sad. this is a very short piece. Great wow words but there is absolutely no punctuation. You describe the setting really well. If i were to rate this between 1-10 i would give it a 5 because i do not understand it what so ever and maybe you did not put any punctuation in there because that is your style. But its not mine.
You're right, the lack of punctuation is a stylistic choice. It's up to you to work out why