I am strong in my weakness, I am the light to the dark. I am yours O Jesus, make me who you are. I can see it clearly my eyes have been opened. O Jesus lead me before this life is broken.
Verse 2:
I am saved and forgiven, my sins have been covered. By the power of Jesus, and the grace of the Father. I am amazed at your love, and how it goes on forever. Oh Jesus you reign in glorious splendor.
Chorus:
Without you I am nothing, I am just words without meaning. Without you I am dependent on my feelings. Without you I am nothing, my words have no power. But with you O Jesus I found my strong tower.
Wow, love this. Great to know more Christians are out there! Good future reference, now I feel better about putting some of my own stuff like this out there...
I love how meaningful these words are, I especially enjoyed the line;
"Without you I am nothing, I am just words without meaning."
Totally agree! Though I do agree with others on those pesky line breaks as well...
This is great. Continue sharing your faith!
Continue writing and being awesome!
~GC
Hello always nice to meet other Christians
Next time for song try to use line breaks instead of a paragraph. It is just more pleasing to the eye when reading lyrics. Other then that I found it very positive and uplifting. Would do great in a church service and any other kind of group gathering.
Keep writing and above all have fun doing it.
This is great. I love it. I have to agree with niteowl in that it might be better with line breaks. Other than that I think it was great.
Hi Hsarver and welcome to YWS! I am no longer a Christian, but I've been to many a church service and this sounds like it could definitely fit in. It has a singable rhythm, which is good. It doesn't seem terribly original to me, but that's probably okay for this genre.
I just have a couple small nitpicks.
1) Why do you have it written out in paragraph form? Sometimes the submitter does that, but here it looks deliberate. Typically, I'd write a song with line breaks. For example.
Without you I am nothing,
I am just words without meaning.
Without you I am dependent on my feelings.
Without you I am nothing,
my words have no power.
But with you O Jesus
I found my strong tower.
I am the light to the dark.
However, his cardiologist cleared his heart following last nights echocardiogram. No connective tissue disorder. Chest X-ray has already been done for the day, and we are praying that it will show the hole in his lung getting smaller." Nice! Are you a Christian? Because if you are, well, I am too! I really like this because it is quite accurate. Seriously, I really really really like this! I hope you keep on writing stuff like this!
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