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Knights of the Green Room



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Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:08 am
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The Messenger Knight returns faithfully after a weeks worth of fighting and slaying beasts. He had one point where he was almost overwhelmed by the hawks of fatigue, but managed to fight on, and before he knew it he had reached his goal. Now he enters the stables to put away his hose, when he sees Hannah rubbing down, and feeding, her horse. He pulls a scroll form his saddlebag and hands it to her.


A coat of Arms! (It is a scroll with a green ribbon tied around it)


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Mon Oct 07, 2013 3:18 am
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Lady Celestia set down her pen and ink jug after completing the first of several quests to earn her honorable knight badge. "I have done well." She murmured to herself. "But now I must finish my mission."

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Mon Oct 07, 2013 3:50 am
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Did one more for the contest!

The Story of the Grave
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I reviewed this: Ferrozine Woman
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Darkness and the stench of dead foes filled his lungs. It was not a pleasant scent to awaken too. He opened his eyes to utter darkness. Sensation began to return to his broken body. He was buried.

Paracosm shook and rattled in his armor as he struggled to push the collapsed enemy off of him. Sweat poured down his brow, his bones ached, but finally he pushed free. The sun shone bright in his eyes. The battlefield raged on, he had defeated lethargy, now he was to complete his task at all costs.

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There are 21 works with 0 reviews and 31 works with 1 review in the Green Room.

Knights! Squires! How can it be that only ONE week ago this room was empty? We must begin a clear once again, but remember to still review with wisdom, and not of a hurried mind; thoughtless and short reviews do nothing for a writer in need of improvement. And all need improvement.
So I call you all TO THE GREEN ROOM!
  





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Mon Oct 07, 2013 4:10 pm
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Knight Dragon intensely feels the chains of Learning that have bound him from the Green Room. His bonds keep him ever within sight of his duties, yet taunt him with just enough slack that he can't reach his weapons. Study, the modern Cerberus of the Green Room, also blocks the path, tormenting the Knight with his uselessness. Yet he watches and waits for an opportunity to strike, and then, to escape. This Knight will not let anything stand in his path, but he knows stupidity will only hurt everyone in the long run. Thus he bides his time.
D.F.P., Knight Dragon
  





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Lady Ariana returns from another quest, this time bearing a small locket she had found on the ground. She sat down on her fur-covered bed and opened the locket. Inside was a picture of a little girl, smiling and happy. Ariana couldn't help but smile at the face and hung the locket over a peg, staring at it for a time. She then recorded her latest quest in the journal.

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As Lady Onyx returned to the castle from a day or two for her birthday, she noticed the announcements and quickly began her journey. Getting herself ready for battle and taking along her journal as well to report her progress as she goes. Before setting off, she had taken the time to grab something to eat as well as a nice drink. Once readying herself, she set off on her journey. Taking along Midnight, her trusty mare, as they set forth into the world unknown.
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Tue Oct 08, 2013 3:20 pm
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After a long day of fighting through the unknown terrain. Lady Onyx looks at her journal, pen in hand. Writing down all of her adventures and details in which she had used to over come them. Though there was not very many, she still was proud of her day. Making progress through the territory was all that she needed to keep on going.

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14. Love is something, but

15. Cassis poem

Once finishing the writing in her journal, she closes it and puts it in a safe place. Keeping it close to her, she gently pats Midnight. Ready to move on to the next challenge of the day. With that, she sets out.
Sʟᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴡɪᴛʜ Cʏᴀɴɪᴅᴇ
⊱ fear ɪs ɴᴏᴛ ʀᴇᴀʟ. ɪᴛ ɪs ᴀ c h o i c e . ⊰

~ Knight Onyx
  





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Tue Oct 08, 2013 3:23 pm
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I have named my things!

» A Sword: Powerful
» A Shield: Defender
» A Helmet: Visionary
» A Horse: Swift
» Full Armor: Protector
» A Jousting Lance: Aggressive
» A Coat of Arms: Symbol
  





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Tue Oct 08, 2013 7:25 pm
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There are 13 works with 0 reviews and 34 works with 1 review in the Green Room.
The Green room is looking a little better, but still needs our help.
  





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Tue Oct 08, 2013 8:14 pm
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TheMessenger wrote:There are 13 works with 0 reviews and 34 works with 1 review in the Green Room.
The Green room is looking a little better, but still needs our help.



Give me a few hours and once I am done with my studies for the day, my sword will start swinging.

34 you say? Challenge accepted.
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Tue Oct 08, 2013 8:24 pm
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It was down to 32 a few moments ago. I am doing some school as well, but if I'm on then chat me a message and we can take some stuff down together.
  








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