Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your poem today!
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Just a viewing thing, I would break it down in verses. Just for most people, a long block of words will cause the eyes to say that is too much and turn the reader away. Just a little tip.
I sit and stare into the rain, each an unshed tear of mine.
I like this line a lot, it is very deep in my opinion and something I can relate too! Love it!
Over all
There was nothing I could really see as a grammatical error. Great job! Keep on writing and if there is anything else that I can review for your. I would be more than happy to do your review. If you need anything else, feel free to send me a message and we can chat. Thank you very much and sorry this review is so short! :O
~Onyx
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