Young Writers Society

Hi again,
I am now reviewing your work with no sandwich.
To start, I really like how you chose the main focus of this murderous, death like era. I think this really does the mini story well because it is a position that normal people do not really imagine themselves in. As you read this a few times, you think about how true this really is, and I love the emotion and following thoughts it evokes. Because this was such a success, I think you would do really well with other six word stories, and that you should try more. This is a small review, but there's not much to say. This is wonderful! Good job!

again, sorry for all of the really's

I like the part where the guy dies. lolz

Lolz.

I like this. I like this a lot.

Is there a forum for this? 'cause I like this idea ^^ you did I good job.

Hey there Dominusatramentrum,

Firstly that is a Extremly long name lol.

Anyway "the story" well i personally rekon not only is the review longer then the story itself but it would've been a hard challange. And only been allowed to use a certain amount of words? I rekon a lot of people would have struggled at that but you did good.

I hope to see some of your other work to see you and your hands in action.

"The murderer tastes his own medicine." i liked that part and you should consider turning that little sentence into an actual story and i don't know if anybody would agree with me but i would like to see how that unfolds.

Feel free to throw compliments or insults my way, so check out my work

Thanks,
Babygiggles.

I understand that you were only supposed to use six words...

I love it! It's beautiful! Perfect art!

I do have questions.... perhaps you should write a story about it...

Who is this murderer? What is his history? Who has he murdered? What does this medicine taste like (figuratively)? How does he die? Who kills him?

Anyway, I adore this story!

Keep Writing!

yubbies21

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room.
So I couldn't find any punctuation or spelling errors in here
I have to say that as true as this is, I think a little bit of tactfulness may have been in order, had it been more than six words. But I thought it was a clever sentence to make, and quite a good challenge to accept. I may try it now. Good job.
Keep it up!