Published October 1, 2013
The murderer tastes his own medicine.
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Hi again,
I am now reviewing your work with no sandwich.
To start, I really like how you chose the main focus of this murderous, death like era. I think this really does the mini story well because it is a position that normal people do not really imagine themselves in. As you read this a few times, you think about how true this really is, and I love the emotion and following thoughts it evokes. Because this was such a success, I think you would do really well with other six word stories, and that you should try more. This is a small review, but there's not much to say. This is wonderful! Good job!
again, sorry for all of the really's
To give thanks for your review, you can have half of my metaphorical sandwich.
I like the part where the guy dies. lolz
Lolz.
I like this. I like this a lot.
Is there a forum for this? 'cause I like this idea ^^ you did I good job.
Thank you! I learned about it in my Language Arts class.
It's awesome! As I've already stated, heh
Hey there Dominusatramentrum,
Firstly that is a Extremly long name lol.
Anyway "the story" well i personally rekon not only is the review longer then the story itself but it would've been a hard challange. And only been allowed to use a certain amount of words? I rekon a lot of people would have struggled at that but you did good.
I hope to see some of your other work to see you and your hands in action.
"The murderer tastes his own medicine." i liked that part and you should consider turning that little sentence into an actual story and i don't know if anybody would agree with me but i would like to see how that unfolds.
Feel free to throw compliments or insults my way, so check out my work
Thanks,
Babygiggles.
Thank you! The name is Latin by the way. It means Lord of Ink. It's basically a snazzy way of saying that I'm a writer.
Hey! My username is Latin too! Such a great language.
Warrior! Cool!
I understand that you were only supposed to use six words...
I love it! It's beautiful! Perfect art!
I do have questions.... perhaps you should write a story about it...
Who is this murderer? What is his history? Who has he murdered? What does this medicine taste like (figuratively)? How does he die? Who kills him?
Anyway, I adore this story!
Keep Writing!
yubbies21
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room.
Good job.
So I couldn't find any punctuation or spelling errors in here
I have to say that as true as this is, I think a little bit of tactfulness may have been in order, had it been more than six words. But I thought it was a clever sentence to make, and quite a good challenge to accept. I may try it now.
Keep it up!