Poetry Fight

I LIKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!! MORE POETRY YOU WRITE SHOULD!!!!!!!!!

Loved it. Loved the way you worked with the words and make it flow really nicely. Very original and it seemed like you really were at war with someone.

This is a competition, you know.

That’s all you got?

Loved it.

I loved it...its hilarious. thank you for making me laugh! i needed it.

Haha, that's really funny. ^_^ How did you come up with something like this? It almost sounds more like a rap then a poem, but it's still really funny. ^_^ Well great job.

That was really funny. It appeals to all the writers and poets on the site and is pretty much a laugh for everyone! I hope you write another.

The pencil swords were funny and it was all just plain hilarious!

That was so funny, and Cat's right. It can be very true sometimes.

thanks for the feedback! Glad that everyone had enjoyed it so far.

This was pretty good! I liked how it was always the last word of the last line of every stanza that had no other word rhyming it. I thought that that was very creative. I thought that this poem was very creative. Great job, Kaylyn!

'nuff said, but I'll say more.


This was one of the most original pieces of poetry I have ever read. Usually, when people think of funny poems, the whole poem leads up to the last line which suddenly makes the poem hilarious. Your poem didn't do this. The very first line set the mood and tone. Very good. It seemed sort of "tongue-in-cheek"-ish.

The rhyming was all very smooth and natural. Yay! I don't have to talk about rhyming patterns! Your's was excellent. It almost seemed like you just sat down and jotted down your thought, but with better qualitly. Very interesting.

Keep writing poems. You have a good sense of humour.

-Sea-

Funny.

Hilarious. Loved it.
(do you know how long it took me to remember we had portfolios so I could find this poem? )

It sounds so right. *prints it out without your permission and enters into a contest* It's mine, I say! All mine, and so I must win. It's pretty awesome, right, my excellent poem?

Hmm... I dare you to challenge every single poet in the world with this poem. I wonder how many would take it seriously. (gets ready to fight back)

Pencils, sharp! Paper, here! Trees, dead! Nooo!

I'm not sure whether you still want this "poem" to be critiqued, but let me know if you do.

Hah, it made me laugh. It's so true, though. There as those who can write, and those who just... can't. And clearly, you can! Nice work; keep it up!