I LIKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!! MORE POETRY YOU WRITE SHOULD!!!!!!!!!
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?
Loved it. Loved the way you worked with the words and make it flow really nicely. Very original and it seemed like you really were at war with someone.
This is a competition, you know.
That’s all you got?
Loved it.
Piglet: How do you spell love? Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.
Haha, that's really funny. ^_^ How did you come up with something like this? It almost sounds more like a rap then a poem, but it's still really funny. ^_^ Well great job.
This was pretty good! I liked how it was always the last word of the last line of every stanza that had no other word rhyming it. I thought that that was very creative. I thought that this poem was very creative. Great job, Kaylyn!
Rite 2 meh lyk dis...and I shoot you.~Unknown
I'm the future of America. Be afraid. Be very afraid~Unknown
If you're blonde and you know it clap your hands *Snap* *snap*
If you're reading this...you're finished reading.
This was one of the most original pieces of poetry I have ever read. Usually, when people think of funny poems, the whole poem leads up to the last line which suddenly makes the poem hilarious. Your poem didn't do this. The very first line set the mood and tone. Very good. It seemed sort of "tongue-in-cheek"-ish.
The rhyming was all very smooth and natural. Yay! I don't have to talk about rhyming patterns! Your's was excellent. It almost seemed like you just sat down and jotted down your thought, but with better qualitly. Very interesting.
Keep writing poems. You have a good sense of humour.
Hilarious. Loved it.
(do you know how long it took me to remember we had portfolios so I could find this poem? )
It sounds so right. *prints it out without your permission and enters into a contest* It's mine, I say! All mine, and so I must win. It's pretty awesome, right, my excellent poem?
Hmm... I dare you to challenge every single poet in the world with this poem. I wonder how many would take it seriously. (gets ready to fight back)
Pencils, sharp! Paper, here! Trees, dead! Nooo!
Ello everybody!
Wazzup! Immortatily is something I shall soon achieve!
There are some things you can't share without ending up liking each other, and knocking out a twelve-foot mountain troll is one of them. — J.K. Rowling
'nuff said, but I'll say more. 
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(gets ready to fight back)
